ShivangiRajput0498
Hello big brothers here I am again to point out some things , some past has been shown of mc but nothing concrete or related to other main characters but It is surely shown that victor Mallory is a persona of mc Andrew Sherman ,it can be the only one or one of the many
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.
This a good novel but the author doesn't have consistent on updating. So please can you have consistents of updating. ..
A very good book, very happy that I have found it. Upsetting just slightly that there is inconsistent updates. Still very good. Thank you, doing this for ss.
Very VERY good book there mate. Like seriously this book has amazing development and I'm hooked. As a fellow realistic fiction author I'm enjoying every bit of it. Felix is an interesting character and Marrow is best girl, when she's off the alcohol of course XD.
It's actually a Chinese novel that makes sense. You will know when you read it, but this isn't bad it's definitely one of the better football novels in this platform
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This reminds me of Superman’s backstory scientist saves his son and sends him to another world where he has a special power check check and checkOverall good story I would enjoy reading more keep it up
Hey Author, i think you have made a mistake and replaced actual story chapters With anunsment chapters. because right now there is a big time skip after the first chapter
Plus Points:Writing quality is the main plus point to this great world background. Update stability is good and character design is also up to the mark.Drawbacks:To me, I do read slow-paced stories and enjoy them if they intrigue me. This story is Slow-paced but the problem is that it feels like it never took off, it's still there exactly how it started after nearly 40 chapters. They is no sign of the system promised in the tags, MC is reincarnated so many times but seems so underwhelming, I mean... I get that he lost his abilities but still I did not find that aura or charm of a guy who lived 364 times. I liked the slow pace at the start but as the chapters went by, it got boring and I felt like abandoning the book. There are no interesting scenarios to read further.I hope the author correct this.
The greatest story that i have read online.The pace of the story, the caracters, the worldbuilding are perfect. It feels so good to have secondary caracters that have a life and are not just here to be a filler.Great job ! Really worth your time !I would love a collector paper edition.
