he lives in a technological advanced world and doesn't know how stats work........... he put his first 2 stats into perception which he didn't. eed at all at the moment and nit strength....... why? seriously why? He has been beaten to the point of near death for years and could barley finish the exercises and he was just like oh well I'll just put these 2 points Into the Stat I don't understand, even though I literally just ready a very clear straight forward description, and not into the one thing I need right now........
I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go.Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far.As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.
This one seem interesting.Hope it get picked......................... ......................................................................
I don't like this hypocrat mc............................................................................................................................................
It's not really my type of story, however I try to read a little bit of everything , what I've learn is that you can learn something from everything you read
I loved this novel in all it's entirety but he just stopped updating his novel no warning and i have been checking in for like 5 months NOTHING absolutely nothing it's making me sad for me to see my most favorite novel just stop like this and i am heart broken and hope to see one day this up and running again but for me you have lost a watcher. i may come back but i am unable to see that there are no more chapters it's crushing my dreams LITERALLY i have had no dreams sense this stopped :( i hope to see this one day i may come back but not anytime soon
Awesome novel author, this is a rare gem worth getting more attention than it is currently. I hope you get more readers who can view this masterpiece.
Book seems decent but the horrible grammar and repeating things and calling each other it all the time is horrible
This piece of work will hook you up a great deal... It's so addictive that I forsake my sleep for this, but this was worth it! The writing was really good and the storyline was really really great. The pacing, the world building the characters.... Everything felt so natural. As if the scenes keep replaying in front of me! True-blue, this is an awesome work /book! Highly recommend it!!
From the very beginning nicely written story with an 'interesting' sense of humor! Have no doubt you know how to write!The plot is intriguing. The main character is well designed, and his new friend/pet is also fascinated, creature. Well done!Good luck with the contest!
I just can't get over it. I love it too much I wish I can have all the chapters at once and read it through out the night. This is my kinda novel, I wouldnt mind sacrifising my sleep for it
this is the best!........................................................................................................... .................