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A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly. Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh. But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Love the drama at the beginning! The system is my favorite part honestly though! It's comical when it brings up death to the host! Keep up the good work!
Great.
Everything in this story is great! But now the author has kinda left the story abandoned... I would really love it if the author came back to writing the story!
I absolutely melted into this book! From the first chapter to the last I was thoroughly enthralled. The characters feel so real, the twists and turns are unexpected and keep you engaged! The author leaves you with the character's physically feelings!
Not bad, world building is pretty solid. There are some commenters insisting on spoon-feeding. They lack the capability of just a bit of critical thinking. Overall something a bit different and very welcome.
Awesome book keep it up! I would say more but I'm trying not to spoil anything.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Legit though, the best feature is that the characters are not static but have changing personalities all the time. Some people might not like that, personally I do love it. They always learn from their experiences
the name should have been my academy system not my system academy .............,............................................................
Hypocritical protagonist who gets his system stolen. His childish morality never changes and he is betrayed repeatedlyHe is a weak minded coward who never learns from his experiences