"Sir Arthur! What an honour it is to meet you!" he said joyfully. "And your squire, yes? Please, come in, heroes need no walls in this city."
Arthur who is this samael guy on character pic thing please tell me your novel is not turning into 2 Male lead novel
Hey, it's me, statue here! Since I've written the novel and know how it goes, it's all going to be a 5-star for me(I might be a little biased), but I understand it might not be the same for you. This is my first time serializing any of my works, so the pacing and character POVs might feel a little off, but I hope to improve as I go.The worldbuilding, though, will be something you greatly enjoy, and I'll continue expanding it while keeping our MC as grounded and realistic as possible. Thanks again for giving SCS a chance! You guys are awesome!peace, Statue.
How can something written by someone as great as me not be a 5 star? Preposterous!..... Alright, let's put the cringe aside and get down to business. So, ABAT is my first novel and it's likely you will be seeing grammar and other kinds of mistakes here and there.I have tried my best to minimize the amount of mistakes, but it's not practical to completely remove the man as it can make the reading experience a bit bland since I will have to tone down the writing quality by quite a bit, so I hope you guys will go easy on me regarding writing mistakes.Coming to the book itself, and I will admit that I have chosen a rather generic topic but I can't really help is since I don't have any already established audience so I have to go for something trending in order to gather one.But trust me,the book have it's own unique appeal and you will notice it in the first few chapters.At the end of the day, if you want an OP and sensible MC, solid world background, good side characters with a tint of romance added to the mix, then you should give it a read. Also, I will say it now but MC will not necessarily be ruthless.You will see it in the novel his own perspective of such. I will make more comments in the future and be more constant with updates as the novel progresses in content and popularity. Have a nice day!
I have to say that this world the author has created is really, really interesting. It's the type of story that makes me want to see it in the visual medium. Always while reading a chapter I am trying to visualize everything. And to be able to make the reader want to visualize is the proof of how invested they have become in your story. Hera, in the first six chapters, has been very well written out and set up for further character development. Few people characterize their MCs in the first few chapters and many who try to do it are not able to very well. This is one of the rare examples of stories where it is done well and that just adds so much more to this story.For a book that is more about world-building (at least that's what I understand from the description), you have created an excellent stage to further write.A very solid read that I'd recommend people who like world-building to definitely try. Good work, Author!
good ? and not bad story and iIreallly looking forward to read more
It's been more than 3 months is this novel is going to continue .... please update us it's such a good Novel
The story feels very underwhelming; most interactions feel unrealistic. Additionally, the English not being good just adds to the incongruity of the book. If the author really wants to improve, he/she should picture his/her own interactions with people and ponder if the ones present in the book feel normal. The MC also heavily lacks initiative/focus, even after understanding his ability somewhat and how to progress it. Anyways, good luck improving.
This story is a really good career building novel. The characters are written well with distinct personality traits, especially the MC. The MC also isn't one of those dense MC's which makes it a whole lot better to me at least,
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Author is very direct, and writes a story that makes sense.Very easy to follow along, will be reading more.
Best recommendation! I love all the language and plot in this story. Enjoyed it well and was completely blown away!Good job author????????