The story itself is okay, a normal novel, it isnt bad but nothing which really captured me. Reason for it, probably is that there are so many grammar mistakes and other kind of mistakes which are really annoying. And author is lazy, he sometimes use "u" instead of you, another - point is that he even wrote his mc name wrong once, sadly author doesnt care about his readers and doesnt fix anything
The Novel is really nice I won't lie when I started reading I didn't have much expectations about the just wanted to kill time but I you got me hooked the Novel is great and it being your first novel you did an amazing job Am amaze with the way you developed the characters and the other aspect of the novel Keep the good work
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I like the story but the author gave me headache.Every chapter have a flash back like when you are watching na/eu actions like 'arrow' or 'the flash'. And its annoying, well i can read up to 7 to 9 hours straight but with this novel...uhm i can't... Too many details to process in one chapter.Its worth giving it a try i guess. Maybe its just me who hates this kind of format. Well, thats it.. I hope thats for an honest review..
Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3)Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3)Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3)Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3)Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.I love reading it very much when I'm free.every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
The story so far seems quite interesting but the quality of translation is good enough to make the many errors in gender, choice of words, measurements and meaning (!) especially jarring! If they are able to increase the quality of translation or more probably of the editing, I would probably enjoy reading it…
A decent story that's well written and actually worth reading. I hope this will get picked up and translated properly. Till then I'll have to make do with MTL which is less than ideal.
It's look good so 5 star and i hope you don't drop this novel it's ok yo take a break sometime but don't drop .........................................................................................
Good novel. I love it. Don't drop it.
Good novel… but bring back world of tne dietie…. …l.l.l.l,l.Good novel… but bring back world of tne dietie…. …l.l.l.l,l.Good novel… but bring back world of tne dietie…. …l.l.l.l,l.