I am really loving the book, the events progress coherently and at a really great pace. It's a really fun read.
hmm .. interesting story so far... hehehe
Can’t stand the childish Mc who wastes the system that they get. He acts like he’s 10 five or take a year. The rambling on without controlling what he says combined with the childish antics is too much and I didn’t even finish the first arc…
One of the most interesting book i ve ever read. 3d characters,amazing plot , indepth world building, no youngmasters and cck suckin bitches and finally a cunning mc in flesh ,not like the ****tynovels who start with saying smart mc but being an ass later . The only thing i feel it lack is the character interaction between mc and the lover. Relationship is a give and take thingy. Until now i ve only seen mc giving and caring while alina being a ***** many times, maybe it will change. Overall its goddamn good!!!!
the book was great and the character development was amazing and the story development was amazing and nice and the writing quality was good and clear
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This novel is written by Chetan Bhagat. I think that you should get THE ORIGINAL AUTHOR'S (CHETAN BHAGAT) permission before posting his work like this FOR FREE!Besides, it's not a great novel anyway.
This was excellent every details are written in the story and it was interesting to read you all will enjoy this story. Author you should keep it up!!!
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What can I say? The main character is annoying. She keeps contradicting herself when it comes to decision-making. She always has an answer for the unknown but at the same time doesn't, always foreshadowing and prognosticating, which makes it seem forced. Additionally, the way the'sensei' acts and presents himself is like an emo, making the story seem childish and difficult for the protagnist. He's acting like some emo who has just lost his family and wishes to destroy everything. All he cares about is killing and gaining strength, which can be extremely annoying at times. This guy won't shut up for a moment and think about his response when he's talking to his "so-called student/host." For someone who made the wish to help others, it appears that he's failing twice. I will say this: I didn't get far, and I couldn't get far. The story seems extremely slow. It's taking forever just to get out of the wasp hive, and even by then you won't know what to expect unless you pay for the rest of the chapters. Although well detailed and descriptive, the things that drag the book down are the characters as well as the pace of the story. Fair warning as well. The story seems to be leading toward Yuri, although not tagged, I like to do my own research on the novels I'm about to read, so judging from the authors' reply to others, it seems like another slow-paced, well-written but boring Yuri book. Other than that, the story seems good. For those who enjoy slow-paced stories with a bit of kingdom building, this is for you. Fair warning The characters' decisions may seem correct, but that is only because the plot allowed them to be. It makes the story seem forced, so it's up to you.