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This story has potential. The protagonist looks like a 1000-year-old virgin when he finds himself being used by a beautiful girl, but it is acceptable, since she is the only one counting him with the supernatural world.If you realize that everything he experiences is new to him, then you will not hate this story: Remember that he was gaining little and was only eating, sleeping, and working for your all life.Usually all MC cares about their life first and then their shortcomings. The MC took a while to realize his shortcomings, but he quickly corrects them.The novel's progress is also acceptable.
I definitely enjoy this story, however, I have stopped reading it. The cost of the chapters is very high for their length and the author adds unnecessary advertising at the end of each chapter that pads the word count. 9 tokens a chapter for such short chapters feels like a ripoff. The cute baby talk spelling gets tiring at some point as well.
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,good novel,,,i like this
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Super good novel. I was a fan of authors previous work and can say with complete certainty that this novel is better. I'm glad to see the author's improvements, you can tell it's more thought out and the pacing is quite a bit better. It's still a bit early, but based from what I've seen so far I'm expecting great things and very much look forward to what adventures may await us.
I read till chapter 8 and couldn't take it anymore. Here is the constructive criticism everyone in this website asks for if you give a novel 2 stars without a review (when clearly people are giving 5 stars without reading)English: nice Story: Not trying to be cliche but so totally cliche till chapter 8 Tournament plot, cultivation manuals, beauty takes interest cuz why not,Strong to weak with some random cheat Now here is a plot hole. (there are more but i don't wanna be too hard on the author since i think it is his first time writing lmao) Apparently played the game for but doesn't know anything about the game except the power system (was he a fking slave in the game? He doesn't know fking anything except the history)My disagreements. Every character acts like a person from your typical wuxia novel.Not gonna say anymore. Good luck. Bye bye.
Love this book. Can't wait for the updates this book has been one of my top favorite to read so far on this app.i have told all my friends and family about it.
The story start with dark plot and i really enjoyed how the author create the post apocalypse and how the author make the plot of this story not boring. every chapter i read i really can't hold myself
I like the concept and you went slightly off of usual main classes for MC also I like how you didn't go with the reincarnated idea its good but hard to make good unless you plan your story well overall good chapter
It's looking good so far, and while the author's first language is not English they are doing quite well. This has plenty of potential with the first three chapters at the time of this review, looking forward to more.
The tension in these chapters is INSANE. Let me count the ways Fang Lingchu is one wrong move away from execution: 1. She gossips about the Emperor's patched underwear in FRONT of him and the entire court 2. She laughs about it 3. She praises herself right after praising the Emperor in the most unhinged way possible 4. She asks the System for MORE gossip during a serious legal proceeding about a prince's son committing murder 5. She reveals a general's secret affair to literally everyone And the Emperor is just sitting there going "..." while his face turns red. Minister Fang is literally planning where the family grave should be. The ministers are all just multitasking between actual state affairs and listening to this woman's mental gossip sessions. But here's what's actually scary—beneath the comedy, the stakes are REAL. Prince An's son has murdered commoners. The law is being debated. The Emperor knows about it and has been turning a blind eye. When Fang Lingchu asks "What heinous deeds has this Prince An's Son committed?" while people are literally arguing about life and death, it shows how detached she is from the gravity of the situation. And that's what makes me nervous for her. She's walking around thinking this is all a joke, but the court is full of people who would kill her for what she said. "Couldn't he have given a little warning? My kneecaps are practically shattered!!!!!!" — this line made me laugh so hard but also, bro, you just knelt on the floor in front of the EMPEROR without warning. The stakes are literally life and death and she's complaining about her knees.