Mainly feels like missing 2 diff stories into one but still good . Both leads mainly show dark in nature , that's makes slightly more interesting. The way they challenge each other for dominance was just WOW what a big deal buddy . Keep going through dark side .
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The only problem I find annoying is the mixup of genders . MC is male but becomes she sometimes due to bad translation.otherwise I found this novel to be a good read and liked it very much .
I like the story so far, well written characters and MC's seems sharp. Its actually smart characters with their own motivations, not just easy faceslapping content but smart characters
"Alright to the middle floors we go then." Keres let them take the lead as they made their way to the middle floors. The party easily decimated the groups of monsters they encountered on their way to the middle floors. While traveling Keres found out they belonged to the Loki familia and have been adventurers for the past two years. The only area that gave the group a bit of trouble was the tenth through twelfth floors as the mist produced in those areas impeded their vision. During the times when they encountered no monsters. June used it to get to know Keres better.
Some of the few things I have to say of this novel:the idea of the system is pretty darn original, I mean so far I don't think that I've read about this kinda system somewhere else. And coming from a person who reads a lot of novels, it says a lot. Overall, it's a great original idea.Writing quality is great and the flow is smooth. I'm a few chapters in and I'm liking what I read. Out protagonist Diamond is a kind-hearted lady who has been heart by love in the past, not to mention that she was born in a poor (somewhat) family. After an act of kindness, she gains a system. Honestly, after getting rewards, I half expected her to be frugal, due to background, or absolutely batsh't rich. spree. Ngl, she's somewhere in the middle. I love what I read, I'll continue reading it, that's for sure. Keep up the great work, Author!
La obra está bastante buena, me gustó, la historia esta muy bien escrita y es interesante, lástima que duren tanto para actualizar.Ahora pondré relleno MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMGMMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMGMMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG
I am currently only at chapter 13 but the story is a really good one! At first it seems like a normal MC is weak but gets strong story but this novel is somehow different! A must read!!
Amazing story! There's literally nothing to complain about this book, everything just sits perfectly! The plot is very interesting, and also written beautifully. The author has the ability to intrigue the readers with his/her writings. I really like this one! I'm sorry for the late review, but I'm glad to be here! Keep on writing, author! I will be cheering for you.
This is a really good novel, I'm in love with it already, pls give us more and I will be delighted to support the novel... Thanks for all the chapters
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