Myboijerry
The book is great. Really enjoying this book
With a system like this, what's the point of story progression? Protagonist in chapter 4 opens a gold chest: obtaining invincible magic god training hall, origin wood and plethora of other items. All the artefacts he recieves are amongst the rarest, most powerful in the entire universe. Mind you, each of these items in a typical Chinese xianxia stories are usually the protagonist's cheat. And this protagonist just recieves them in mass. The author overly-compensates in this story.
well can only give it a 1 star because there is nothing to read and shows up over new recommended so 1 star it is............................................
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A classic but interesting novel. I haven't read much so I can't tell for sure but, there are two problems I'd like to criticize. First, it is a really serious problem. Author has a problem conveying information. There is almost no basic information and MC is knowing people or things he's never been in contact with. For example, we know amlost nothing about the game at all. We only get to know that mc's profession is a tanky melee type. We don't know any other information about the professions at all. And maybe because he think it may become annoying, author didn't show mc's status at the beginning. We don't know what status the game use, original status, or how much increase per lvl. Nothing. Nad when authir feels like it, he suddenly show the status and says mc's status is really incredible. We don't know how to compare at all. Although mc's status is not shown, almost every piece of equipment has their status explained. And mc started saying things like "Wow. This lvl5 blue equipment has tge status of a lvl10 equipment which noone has ever seen before." and "Wow, these monsters, even pro gamers may not be able to fight as well as me" when he's clearly not in the industry. In short, author hides all info and only says "Hey, my mc is really awesome." The second thing should be the balance. While I know that this novel is all about mc's picking up op equipment, he got a third lvl out of the five lvls of equipment currently known at lvl5 and that's not even a one time thing. He's destroying the game balance from the very start. Unless it is a solo mcvs guilds, there can be almost suspense at all with this kind if balance. Dispite the criticism, this is still a pretty interesting book. So, I still recommend trying out.
at 1st i was like...ok cool he is a legendary assassin that died n got a free rebirth n decide to not be an assassin in his new gotten life.instead to try living normally n start playing games..he choose to be an assassin in the game cos he thinks he is good at it,yeah okay..after getting a personal skill n recruiting his last life friends of assassin,making a gaming workshop of sort...THEN he went n change class to a HERB HUNTER just cos he can wield all sort of weapon n cast grade 3 magic??? n that skill cant even be lvl up more then lvl 3 cos those peeps at the wizards n witches will kill the class holder???WTF!!!! dude...i enjoy reading this...if that herb hunter is a subclass i think i would read more...n u even gave the MC that night king fragment???then the GF got the invite to change class to an assassin bcos the MC is an idiot????dude...DUDE...u have been molding the MC to be an assassin from the start...IRL or in game. then suddenly a herb hunter...i really cant take it...imma drop this.a herb hunter????A FUCKING HERBALLIST for a MAIN CLASS
I guess its normal (is it?) for chinese WNs to have the MC automatically choose whos bad or good, friend or foe the moment he sees them, and all the women automatically be attracted to the MC, man its bad news for you if you get the aggro of the MC you're automatically a jerk, asshole, etc. And you're lucky if the MC likes you because you're automatically a cool guy or something.Also the author does not know how gravity works, theu are apparently ditching the dying earth for a new planet which is 10,000 times larger than earth, i was like WTF??Also too much names to remember to the point where when a name pops up you wonder if this guy/gal already showed up previously and just got forgotten.
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Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.
