I'm honestly wondering what on Earth am I watching because ... I don't really know what's to come next. But still updating the novel with new chapters makes it decent to read it more.
Based and redpilled. I loved the part when the characters did the thing and I was like "whaa that's so cool!!!" because it was just so so cool!!! I really loved how it explored themes too! Overall great story, can't wait to read more!!
Shameless of webnovel is beyond hopeless
A pure waste of time. 2/3rds of the 20 first chapters are spent on the reactions of some random unnamed characters, the author is so blatant about it that even if the concept is cool he's already managed to run it into the ground.
Although I have read many reincarnation stories this one seems a bit different. It have a lot of potential but it will be great if the author just went through and fix the little mistakes in the sentences.Anyhow that doesn't mean the story is bad. It was perfectly fine and it keeps anyone engaged. Story development is OK. The loving charecter suddenly getting changed into a pervy one is little bit of irritation for me but still the book is worth a try. Keep it up author let your story influence many as possible.
It's kinda catchy and interesting, I highly recommend it Read and thank me later ?
Hello Author Pen,From the first few chapters that I have read I can say that it's a engaging story, esp with the start and how you introduced comedy side to a xianxia novel. I really like it and it's new. The writing is so well done it's very easy to understand and it's engaging.
I really liked the story till the end of first volume .But it all went downhill from there More than 50 chapters to describe 2 days of him returning back to his family Then how he fall in love with a girl who is more than 120 years old in a single day and he is not even 12. So much many more things I find unnecessary . Also I find demons too powerful if just one marquis rank demon and do damage to all of the continent .
Very creative! I'm not a big romance type person but the writing stile is very nice. I also love how it starts right away into action and the aspect that the character repeats different timeliness over and over again!
Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.
Don’t take this novel seriously very good novel, read all chapters want more. Unlock them already bros please please many characters in my review ok.
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