Why a good story become like this??
The story shows a lot of promise. The world background and characters are reminiscent of the Dragon Ball franchise. Keep on writing more chapters.
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the best of the sports fiction I've read please update regularly
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Confuso demais, nada faz sentido.Se quiser ler jogue seu cérebro no lixo antes.Pura besteira, o autor simplesmente escreveu qualquer coisa e torceu que desse certo algo que claramente não aconteceu.
Okay the grammar is really good, the story starts really well. The character is good but I do hope he will be more dragon then human, just a more advanced mind for now. The update stability is good but I need way more. Much about the world background isn't known for now
That's a cool story with a cool cover and name. Looking forward to see how the story unravels! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a relatively well done fantasy apocalypse for the first 175ish chapters that turns into a chuuni power trip that puts a frown on your face. an amazing read for those first 175 chapters with minor annoyances, but after that it takes a lot of copium to stomach the absolute waste of potential this premise had. Writing Quality:The grammar of the story is great compared to most of the novels on here with only occasional minor mistakes. The description of events is often repetitive especially in the case of female characters. Almost every single one is sexual and painted as a "seductress with a hot body" even when they are doing something completely normal it has to be mention that they have a hot body. It kind of takes away from the point of several scenes, but this is still tolerable due to the great set up and delivery of the fights in the story.Story Development:The story development of the novel starts out fantastic. The way that things progress leave you excited with anticipation for what will happen in the next chapter. The build and execution of different arcs in the early part of the story leave you satisfied and wanting to read a few more chapters until the MC decides to put his main motivation for surviving and getting stronger on the side burner because the author seemed to think that wanting to save your family was too boring, and the great story just needed some extra edginess to a story about a calculative brooding blood mage in the apocalypse. Character Design: As far as I have seen in this novel there are 4 characters with any kind of character development. the MC, his succubus partner, the real female lead, and Chen He. Every other character is soon to be annihilated villan of the day, faceless minion number 14, or peerless beauty with a hot seductive body with a bit of innocence that makes her even more irresistible. The MC has actually had a decent amount of character growth, but he goes from cool, calculating, and filled with mistrust to a mix of a chuuni, a young master drunk on power, and "I repay kindness a 1000 fold, and contempt 10000 fold." like it is completely understandable how the character acts and treats others based on the background given all until he suddenly becomes like a chuuni on a power trip. the only character that has had a good character development is Chen He. I thought I was going to hate Chen He, but he is the only character that has development that doesn't ruin their character. World background: This is by far the best world and premise for a apocalypse novel I have seen. The power system is interesting, the mutated animals and higher order creatures are cool and the restrictions placed on modern weapons is nice. Overall:I would recommend this to people want a short fun read, but if you are looking for a new novel to pick up and read with the updates do not waste your coins or fast passes. The fights are fun and it's great until the MC becomes a power hungry despot that has his head so far up his a** he forgot who he was.
Such an interesting story! The synopsis wasnt too detailed but surely intriguing. The idea of the story itself was lovely. Well done author will surely recommend this story to others
In just the first 20 chapters, the premise is already showing signs of being ignored in favor of focusing on generic cultivation novel themes. Sure the MC can't cultivate normally, but body cultivation isn't a foreign concept. And it just so happens that body cultivation requires a lot of medicinal herbs. Makes sense and should work out, but then things get weird.There's only passing reference to the MC actually using the system. And sometimes it's just ignored and hand waved afterward with a "oh yeah he did that, so that's why he can do this now".Speaking of the MC, the author doesn't seem to know what to do with him. Is he scheming? Kinda, not really. He does some unnecessarily scheme-y things, but do they matter? It's starting to seem like no, as it veers more and more into generic cultivation garbage. Angry clans, young masters, shadowy figures that speak cryptically and probably won't appear again for 50 chapters. Sure poisoning the sect elders, and then giving the antidote that contains a different poison seem like the edgy thing to do, but what advantage does that give him?Then he starts going into blood rampage mode for... reasons? There weren't any signs of it before, but sure, go slaughter for a month and ignore the herbs you should be raising. I'm sure the elder you asked to watch them will take care of it seeing as you poisoned him before.All in all, people making dumb decisions for dumb reasons, or even no reason at all. Mildly entertaining when it's not ignoring its own premise, generic stupidity when it is.
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