I loved this story for the most part. I had a lot of fun reading it honestly. I would say it became my favourite character webnovel even. However the author randomly adds another girl in a perfectly good and wholesome relationship. It goes from being a unique story about an actual couple to another generic harem. It's one thing for the story to be a harem but it just randomly becomes harem in the later part. It completely ruins everything and plummeted the storytelling and my enjoyment from there.
I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!
