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Zhen Xiu went to dress up for the office. Meanwhile, Shen Ya was tormenting Jiang Wui because of his lies. She wanted to teach him a sound lesson before starting something with him.
I'll have to start composing my words now. Ahh, Jesus.
By the time she had finished changing, Emily was pulling Stigma by the arm with authority and snapped him back into reality, ignoring that fact that she had yet to give him time to respond.
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"It's not who you have pissed off in the past that got my attention, Birdie," She replied. "It's who you are going to piss off that caught my eye."
Xin Fan's eyes twitched as he looked at the figure. From simply the red hair, he could recognize the person. It was Tong Hu. Tong Hu cracked his neck as his fist started to glow. Although Xin Fan saw no movement, he could feel a rush of air head to his face. Instinctively he shifted his head to the side. A crack slowly formed on the rock behind him. Xin Fan quickly retaliated punching forwards. He didn't know what it was that he hit, but he hit something. Yet at the same moment, Xin Fan saw Tong Hu flinch as he took a step back. Under his breath, Xin Fan heard a small murmur.
"It's Pe- no, call me Gray Twan
Strocker appeared in front of Silk, the force on all sides didn't stop though. "So what if I'm being used. Look at me, I'm young and powerful."
Akira was able to rest before the next semester starts again however, Sera kept on challenging him everytime she had the chance. Of course, Akira wins everytime and he always has to praise her for improving.
here for the event....The story is good and the pacing is also good. The grammar is alright. on the side note: I think you posted 2 versions of the 2nd chapter.
So far, is entertaining, too son to say more about the world building
the book is really good. It's been a while since I've picked something up on Web novel and haven't been able to put it down. it gets dark and twisted at times. but everyone needs that little bit of darkness in their life. only downfall is waiting for the next chapters to release ?
