Hello readers.This will be my last self-review for this novel as I can only afford to lightly spoil the first volume, the rest you must experience on your own.The first volume has finally ended everyone, it's been a blast to edit and add many things to this version of my story, I believe I've written the best first volume I possibly could.And although this is an 'Extra' novel, it isn't even close to how others with the same name are written, because while I enjoy this type of novel I wanted to write it differently, unlike the others where the weapon selection chapter is always 20 kek.So expect a longer introduction to the world in the first two volumes and only then, when the MC establishes himself as someone proper in the story will the Academy arc truly begin.The text below contains spoilers so only read this if you have doubts about reading this novel.For now, I'll answer a few of the questions I've received so far.
The story has great potential.... It will become a good story in no times... Keep writing till the end .... There is some grammatical error, I hope you can pay attention to that sector too, as it helps with the quality of story.
it's full of suspense and arouses the need to read the next chapter to see what happens. just thinking of what is Damien upto and who lucian is exactly . all in all i am loving this
"You should be able to levitate things too, in a few days, and when you do, it'll take another month to master just the basics. I think you can push objects, though. Here, let's try to see if you can create compressed air around you. That's the basics for pretty much everything we can do," he said.
I LEGIT cannot get enough of this. This became my Wednesday addiction for real. I am officially addicted. The first part was GENIUS, and the second part is getting me soooooooo hyped and excited ugh, I need more, I need the next Wednesdays. I loved P and I loved A, and I loved to learn who they were and how they were connected in real life, and how this is gonna work. See you next Wednesday, because I am obsessed!
hey auther if you read this you should add the flood from halo and destroyah from godzilla and carnage from spidermann, destroyah could be a demon of both khorne and Laharl
I had come here for the yuri, but gotten a lot more instead. I had reached the paid chapters (75) and despite there being little to no yuri, (prob cuz they are 4yrs old right now) when I read this story, everything was done so well and so interesting that I didn't even have time to look for mistakes. The only thing I can remember is that the word real was missing the -l in one sentence, I had no qualms about the writing quality, the SOU, the Story Development, not the Character Design. Let me not forget, the World Background was an amazing piece of work as well. This review is kind of biased since I do love Pancakes (author), but it shouldn't be far from the truth, I encourage you all to read this wonderful story, you will like it, and if you don't, keep reading and then you will like it; yes, I am saying your only option is to like it because you will like it.....
I'm a fan of dungeon delving and the OP, antisocial MC is a good touch.The concept is quite interesting and I think it goes well with the MC's personality. The writing style is good aside from minor mistakes. I'm pretty curious about what goes on in the other characters' heads when the quiet guy with the scary aura starts rubbing his chin out of nowhere.
The main character does not have any cheats except for his memories. He will change the plot. He makes mistakes but learns from them. He is like a back ground character but he is strong. He cares for his friends and is loyal to them ,his friends too are loyal to him. He is loyal to his wives to and says his dreams to them. One of the best novels I had the pleasure of reading.
Where are the chapters ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Thank you for the chapters. Since there are only 4 chapters I can't say much about the story but I like it so far. I don't have anymore power stones for today otherwise I would give you one. I am just going to add this novel to my library. I don't really give out any reviews because I am no good at it, but I hope to read more of this novel.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?