Alright. So a new review is needed. Especially since this is now developed into a pay and premium type story. However, of all the VRMMO stories on here, this is among the top worthy of SS. Some may say it’s just an ******* work, but it honestly stands above and apart many of the translated works. Here’s why: (yes it’s long cus it’s honest)1. The writing quality is excellent in grammar and spelling with tons of modern literature, video game and movie references that fit so smoothly and make the story enjoyable. Instead of being cliche it fits just right in the moment and makes you smile and laugh. The dialogue is not too lengthy as to be boring and yet always adds life to the characters and shows insight into their characteristics, histories and relationships. It is also consistent, even as the characters develop and change/grow the dialogue continues to match. 2. The updates are steady. While there isn’t a bunch of mass releases due to it being written practically live by the author, you get your daily fix and if you are that addicted then go privileged for a good headstart. As a written piece rather than translated piece this is by far the most important quality of the author. It shows dedication and that the story will not be abandoned anytime soon. 3. The story development is unpredictable yet natural, with a good mix of cliffhangers and plot twists. Good luck and bad luck are there in spades without the need for OP MC. Which is a refreshing break from all the rest of the VRMMO novels that are like clones. It has all the great elements of a VRMMO such as NPC realism/comedy, realistic updates/character nerfing (lol. Oh so real for online games) and bug management (because honestly if you are OPing someone game then AI/moderators should be looking at you which is biggest bull**** of most VRMMO), real interaction/consequences between game and life, not too bogged down in stats /game details, struggles both in game and in real life (some of which are beyond the MC control and capability to fix), romance without too over dense characters or super maxed charm and beauty for every character, lots of comedy without having to be overly dependent on face slapping (yes library of heaven path which was written on repeat every chapter), and most of all simultaneous story developments that twist, flashback keep you in a rollercoaster with a mix of pace that is easy to be comfortable with and doesn’t force events/development. 4. The character development is the only one I marked as 4, but that’s only cus the damn author made so many interesting characters that I’m honestly deep in anticipation of their development and future influence. Especially in RL. But of course RL moves slower than game cus RL is always just like that. The game characters however are full paced and well developed with just enough details to make them lovable but with the hidden potential to surprise you and become a plot development. Underestimate nobody. There is no cliche characters so far, although at the beginning it seemed like it might go that way. Honestly, it feels like the author development grew at some point and so did the characters or something. But he avoided potential pitfalls. Character relations also change a lot but in realistic ways as we would with ppl who we consider old/new to our lives. And there is character conflict both large and small. Lol. The scenarios they also end up in with eachother are a smooth flow as well as their reactions. The NPCs are so damn lovable and their is a clear distinction in the feel of the story between the MC with players and NPCs that neither one feels useless and that could be left out. I’m just saying that if you are a big addict to RL development then you may be a little frustrated. Lol. But it’s VRMMO story so that’s what it’s all about and that aspect will develop at a higher pace naturally. 5. I’m out of space. But it’s damn awesome. So get to reading already.
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Qidian took the chapters from the translator and is now holding the story hostage as it enters the final chapters. Qidian has stolen the translator’s account and now there will be no new chapters until Qidian decides when to release them. Us fans of the story are now screwed and unable to read more of this story that has been completed translated because they story the account from the translator. I just want to read the story and now we have gone over a week without the daily 2-3 chapters the translator used to give and we won’t because of Qidian. Fk you Qidian for holding the story hostage!!!! Just release the already translated story like the translator has said. They’re alll on his account and you just need to hit publish. What a horrible company.
I just hope he behaves like a blood thirsty vampire. Not one that wants to coexist with humans. Like ndhduhdhdbd ehebe ehe rge rgrue e rydrdscggd
1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel
What I found most disturbing about this story are the long, never-ending sentences. I think this story was written by a ten-year-old with a sixteen-year-old libido. I like the theme of the story but can't stand the writing.
Great story, just a few problems with grammar and spelling but overall I'm enjoying the story. Looking forward to what happens next. . . keep on updating and I'll keep on reading
Another cuckold protagonist. He is incredibly pathetic and subservient to women. It's as if the author not only enjoys but even yearns for humiliation. The MC likes to be taken advantage of. The translation is not good, if it's even translation and not an MTL. The family aspect of the story sucks. So much unnecessary baggage and so many cliche plotlines because of it. It would have been infinitely better if he was solo.
hi author will you be updating the cultivation park novel soon ????
One of the best novels I've read in the recent times. I've read way too many novels to count, probably in between 300-400 and nowadays I'm dropping novels have ways because all the stories seem somewhat familiar to what I've read somewhere. This novel also uses concepts familiar from some of the novels here in Webnovel but what keeps me keep reading it is the authors way of keeping his readers engaging with his way of writing. The world background is also good enough but the only aspect I think the author can focus a bit more are the side characters in his story. The MC's character is well established but some of the other characters he interacts with like Mia, Alex and the guy that's working for him in the tower (don't remember his name). Such characters have a lot of potential and could be developed more so that the readers can empathize with the characters more. Lastly the update stability is really good, from what I noticed the author releases atleast two chapters a day. Overall it's a very good novel.
author of super gene , lol aint gonna even bother . sg was total waste of my useless time and can probably guess how this will turn out with kind of **** synopsis
You did a really good job here. Great flow and well-organized. Love seeing the main characters groe closer. Keep up the awesome work!