I like the plot. I recommend this.
Love this story
awesome story
this author is on another platform and this book has stayed just like this for close to a year. no updates, no closure, nothing. lots of her books are this way. she gets distracted writing new books and leaves others unfinished. it's very frustrating !!
Great story
I was so looking forward to the story line. The grammar is horrible in this book. I can deal with a few mistakes but its to the point it makes the book difficult to read.
I wish I could get my money back.
This such a nice story. two race involved. I will follow this story to the end
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As is often the case with many quick transmigration novels, there are some truly engaging and moving arcs, some that are merely average, and others that fall well below par. The biggest drawback of this story is that it concludes with an incredibly rushed and emotionally hollow arc. This finale, which should have been the most impactful, stimulating, and cathartic part of the narrative, feels flat and unsatisfying.
The final ten chapters were largely unremarkable and ended rather abruptly. The only truly moving moment was the sacrifice, which was given only a few paragraphs.
Despite this, many other arcs were still quite interesting and emotional, so I do recommend them (my personal favorite was the post-apocalyptic arc). However, you might want to try to erase the last arc from your memory after finishing the book, to avoid spoiling the overall experience.
if it's low it'd also possible bc of the update time, I remember a gem that got dropped to r500 or smth and as soon as there was an upd it jumped to r100 smth
Ah *wipes single tear* that's my goal you know!! BL novels here feel like abandoned houses, so I always comment and engage to erase that loneliness ??
Nanomancer
I'm currently struggling to continue reading this slice-of-life novel despite its initial appeal, because the main character (MC) displays concerning pedophilic tendencies. Initially, these tendencies were轻微, but as the story progresses, they become more prevalent, with phrases like "Illuna is so adorable while doing that" or "Shii is so cute" disrupting the flow. The author focuses excessively on describing the attractiveness of young girls without providing any substantial details, like eye or hair color or their age. In contrast, when it comes to lolis, the author is overly descriptive.
Moreover, the MC shows little motivation to improve or prepare for the eventual showdown with a powerful enemy who may be as strong or stronger than him. Instead, he spends his time idly in his dungeon, relying on plot armor to conveniently win. This lack of character development and progression is frustrating.