Over all absolutely loved the book. If you enjoy culitvation novels this one is a great one to get immersed in. Other than minor translation issues I personally think the ending felt rushed, but thats pretty common in these books. Now I just wish there was more.
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First of all the translation is great ?, Though there are some repeated paragraphs in a chapter overall it's good.The MC is boring ? I have read nearly 300 chapters and it's slightly interesting now .... Read it if you are bored
love the book, the story development is kinda slow but the world the mc lives in is incredible and i think the book is going places,i would recommend this novel to others,so give it a read and great job author!!!!
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the author should get an editor to correct the grammar and english.overall story setting seems goodAnd the cultivation ranking..... just love it
This is a breath of freshness among cultivation novel mostly having a chaotic evil protagonist,I am enjoying it so far the scenarios are nicely explained will look forward to moreeee
although I'm writing this review pretty early in the story, I will take it down if it doesn't live to my expectations.Unlike other stories I may just have the main character be a nobody or something like that, this character has that and the writer than multiple chapters to really allow you to feel relating to the character instead of simply using it as a plot device. This add depth and fleshes out the story as a whole.
It's Boring To be honest. Not worth reading if this goes on. Read upto Chapter 15, and nothing noteworthy happen that can engage me on reading the next chapters.
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Dis book is wonderful pls update the suspense is killing me It's a very interesting book I wonder how the competition will be or if he gets d girl how it ends overall it's a very interesting book
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