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This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.
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The action element in this novel is very interesting to read. The author has a style that is quite unique. This makes the story quite different from the many game novels on Webnovel.
This concept of Qi is amazing. The world building was done perfectly well and at a good pace. This was my first time reading such a genre and I immediately fell in love with the story. I will keep on reading it in the future too.
Can anyone recommend me webnovel like this with tower system , I really likes this novel but it seems to have been dropped by the author for some reason
There’s a lot about this book that I really enjoy but it’s also very hard to truly love.The good:- World building- Side characters have depth- CombatThe not-so-good:- Increasing number of mysteries with very few questions answered- 600+ chapters and I feel like the MC doesn’t know much more about himself than at the start- The pacing (how is the MC still level 50?) at this rate I’ll be old by the time the main cast catches up to the real threats in game. Or the pacing is going to get all wonky. Other:- Feels like the MC should have been able to do more with his past memories. The fact that those memories are fragmented isn’t my favorite. But maybe it’ll matter more in the future.
I dropped at chapter 1 dialogue is terribleand inconsistentthe cat says MC is a great artist then says he is d class and c class being able to draw a perfect picture ( totally idiotic due to paintings and drawings being based upon a person's perspective and it's history)
remember when I saw was the only one that was the 8AM and I woke him to a place in a det to stop and the grass was in my life and he was shunned and I woke
I love this so far I saw you said there was no yandere tag why not add that in to the description I was kinda getting that vibe from her but I wasn’t positive until I checked? I love it though!
I don't write a lot of review even more longish one but this story deserves it. so I will write a relatively detailed one.world building:the story has only 80s chapters but the author already has created a solid foundation for the world building without creating apparent holes nor limiting the routes for its further development. He was able already to give a solid general idea of the world without sterile info dumps. and being able to describe a world setting of a story through the simple development of the plot is impressive, even though the author sometimes cheated a bit through the use of the thoughtful nature of the MC (there are more than a few inner monologues)writing style:author has a grammar better than most other writers here. He has also improved his abilities as a narrator throughout the story. Sone initial imperfections (like the often hidden monologues and a bit of almost being excessive in MC' s complaints about children of the plain) were dealt with easily after an hidden (well not so hidden for people with "high IQ" cit. lol) plot point was partially developed, it made the general writing style fun and refreshing.Characters: Author has worked a lot on fleshing out the characters and I am not talking only about the MC, even the secondary characters (including supposed villains/enemies) are being slowly fleshed out. Same goes for the female characters both the potential lovers and the ones who will be simply close to MC. this last point is important because while there is an harem tag and I don't know how big the harme will be, I have no doubt that even harem haters could love this story because fro what I can read there won't be a collection of dolls for the MC...all the potential love interests/important female characters are being slowly developed and fleshed out and most of all they are talented so no risk of simple dolls/wall flowers following the MC. the MC itself is refreshing he is transmigrated/reincarnated as the top level of the young master of his words but surprise surprise he was never a trash and he is not an arrogant/dumb psycho without emotions or with his brain in his pants so for certain aspects it reminds while being even better than the MC of the senior brother novel.in short it is a worth novel to read no matter if you are looking to simply have fun or to find a serious reading ...the author is good and the story has an absurd overall potential and quality...I truly hope it will be a long story and Mr author can keep writing it until it's "natural ending" without dropping it or going in hiatus
This book is very well written, and has no grammar errors that I could notice while reading, or prevented me from reading in peace. I think there is daily updates, which is also nice! Keep it up!