KevinHarper1476
Like many before me, this author is shamelessly reviewing his own work. The story isn't perfect and it isn't boring either. Like many xanxia or eastern fantasy novels, you might find some cliche here and there or mistakes. Anyway, give it a try and you might end up liking it.
this novel have a huge potential for top ranking ???? even the pace is slow but it is necessary for some details. the story also look much more deep than what we see/read. hope the quality maintain at the top ???
A splendid job you did in this book author. Even though I don't understand some of the cultivation terms, I could still read on because of your beautiful writing style and grammar. The few problems I had, I already mentioned in the comments, aside from that, everything else is perfect for me. I highly recommend this book to readers.
It seems like a good novel to be able to laugh, hopefully it's interesting, I hope it's selecting...........................................
It's a generic reincarnation of a supreme figure regardless of how he died. What makes me rate it so low is they put out cease orders for independent websites that were translating the series, with actually coherent English grammar. I can't wrap my head about the flow of the text with this story on webnovel because it reads like they machine translated it and had a 3 yr old hit autocorrect on top of that. Random terms and such its really confusing which is why I wouldn't recommend this story.
The hardworking Panda is just so adorable. Looking forward to the development of this novel. ?????????????????????
After reading the raws (up to chap 300) I'm quite disappointed. I'm an avid fan of beast taming novels and this one made me feel sad for how the writing quality deteriorated from the beginning.He actually became a Gary Sue. Shi Yu easily fixed every problem that he faced. No hardship whatsoever. The only think that kept me going is the evolution patterns of his beasts. He kept getting stronger and stronger, most materials for evolution were handed out to him by the Gem Cat and even Eleven finished 3 inscriptions after meeting the Turtle of Emperor Wu. I didn't see him struggling that much. He constantly made research discoveries from the Iron eating beasts to the Green Cotton worms. He contracted a high level overlord heroic spirit in an instant, you can even say that even though he had a test. He still easily passed it. There a lot of other scenes like these in the novel where he is basically the darling of the universe and all things go in his way.There are also a lot of anime references. From the heroic spirits, dragon ball, and reincarnated as a slime. Honestly, at first I was not bothered but I really dislike how the author almost copied all the concepts. Emperor Shidi had built a ruin where you can contact Heroic Spirits of the past, a strong purification totem reincarnated as a slime, and a dragon ball appeared that helped woth buggy's evolution.Lastly, I really dislike how outrageous the novel is. For example, when he went into the Dragon Palace he created a department. Oh, he also defeated the 2nd and 3rd prince of the dragon palace. Currently, he even decided yo create a movie. He also sucked the time ruin in imperial university. Cracked emperor Wu's ruin. And many more. And all of the characters reaction are always "I've never seen anything like this" or "all beasts and humans are stunned and shocked" the fact that he can ALWAYS shock totem level beasts are outrageous and repitative.Honestly, the start was good but the writing went downhill. I'm hoping that the author don't do these things in the future.I don't knlw what I'm writing but I'm just really dissatisfied with how the novel had become.
Really sad to see another story to get ruined by subpart translation. I could continue to read this if it were free but it's not really worth your money.
WHERE THE FUCK CAN I EGT MORE, IT'S AMAZING.
The story is so unrealistic that meat pies falling down the sky everyday literally. Thats what this story is all about. Mc no money. Boom! extinct fish from nowhere for sale. Mc poor health. Boom! Fishing rod hook onto cultivation manual. Mc needs sugar daddy. Boom! Billionaire passby his moutain. Mc restaurant no ingredient. Boom! Comes out once a day from an old well. Mc restuarant on some rural moutain for one meal four pax portion only still need to walk to top, cost price random, food type random, opening hour random anyhow when mc is happy. Shi.t this is not a story. This a dude winning lottery x999 everyday.
when we have male dominatated world its normal but when we have female dominated world lets fight for the men men are dominated help them Stupid novel
First of all there is a lot of Netorare so if you are not comfortable with that do not read this. The story itself is ok but nothing really stands out so far besides the NTR aspects.
