>crazy killing Supreme blessing>dragon city 1>great void taboo mastetIf you told me this was auto generated by an ai, I would belive you.It honestly baffles me how you can write this garbage, si wish fulfillment fanfics have higher protection value than this utter garbage.Congratulations, this garbage have finally convinced me to end it all. Good luck fellow readers. Not even God can save you now
I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low? I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this.Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it.Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What?? "I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong. MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced.Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid. Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
I like this book! It's fun, has good writing, and is overall, great! From what I've read so far, and even based on some pteviews from the author themselves, it's excellent and a very worthy read, so go check it out now!!
To be honest I didn't really read this book AND it's probably good. I just wanted a fast pass to continue reading the book I'm already on. Sorry
I think this is a very powerful story line. I'm blown by the detail of what seems to be her experience transitioning it's almost like I was there with her. Great work. Would love to see more. <3
La historia parece interesante, aunque no se porque el MC se volvió de repente tan arrogante cuando es muy débil en el momento y debería de dejar la venganza después de todo para cuando pueda ya abran muerto de vejez, a bueno, la historia esta buena sigue asi
So far, pretty good. Quality is decent, though it could use with a quick edit. Very fact-paced, and makes the readers want to know what happens next. Keep writing author!