KevinHarper1476
............................................................................................................... The story is very difficult to read because of the inconsistent writing
Recommendation to the author, release faster! You can't compete with the novels on here with a 2-3 release schedule.So don't expect a big fan base unless you boost the speed 2 times as a minimum.
First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.
Our MC transmigrated while playing a game. A noob who bought a high ranking account and is an idiot, with annoying misunderstandings. Overall nothing much beyond stereotypes.
If you have a passion and look for a book about dnd than i ask you to leave because as long as you are somewhat familiar with dnd and played some this book will make you cringe hard. 40 chapters in and i can say that translators knowledge about dnd is nonexistent, while authors could only be described as superficial at best. The book is set in modern Earth where MC often travels to different "virtual" dungeons to kill monsters and gain loot. The story is filled with videogame references and humour but is not excessive. The MC has normal view on life and stable personality. While overall it's not a top tier book it has it's own charm and good points so I recommend it to read for people interested in world-hopping genre.
I think this novel is for ladies that have a femdom fetish.. When I read the early chapters I thought this will be a comedy, then when I progress,, I can't bare to read anymoreSo good luck with your story!!! Not my cup of tea.. ??
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Cliché plots forced down your throat like the air you breathe is made out of them. MC saying that he is in a place that no one goes to cus it is absolutely useless and then after 10 hours of tiring leveling up suddenly an Assassin attacks him for no reason, assassin turns out is a strong, beautiful girl of a female guild with problems and that is where is dropped. But there are no mistakes in the grammar and all so a little plus.
LMAO. Just looking through Harem section for new novel to be add in library. Encounter this wild novel with hilarious synopsis. So, here I am, writing a review with 5* just for that synopsis. Added the novel to library. Looking foward for future chapters. Good luck
Overall, it's mediocre. I, personally do not like it. It's not because it's bad or anything, but almost everything so far has been cliche within webnovel, and it ruins it. It'd been alright if you had just started it off *without* the rebirth. Honestly, that would've been far better.
love the book it is just sad tjat I can't read past page 40
I wouldn’t usually give 5 stars to everything when review but the quality I most definitely enjoy, the updates couldn’t be any more stable then what they are now, it could be more yes but once people start doing more especially after getting contracted they tend to burn out. I’m happy with getting something everyday so thats why I gave this a 5 rating. I gave the story development 5 because I like how things are turning out so far, with out giving or trying not to give spoilers, let’s just say we know the some paths for the future already concerning the game, the real world, and the asteroid(im ending her so read to find out more) but I also gave it a 5 because it’s not predictable I know those 3 things will definitely be important later but I don’t know why yet so it draws you in with thinking(for me what would I do if I was in the situation) the character design I gave a 5 because at first I was like who can this MC get passed his innate defects, will spoiler his innate talents and the 3 things I mentioned earlier. And it’s still early enough that we are meeting others coming to know more about them as story goes(it’s not just stable in updates but the rate of development in my opinion) lastly background is a 5 because again we have the info but we don’t know the reasons for everything we are giving enough to speculate and comeback for more. Give it a shot if you don’t like it at least try to get to the part after he was forced to do a certain thing as thats in my opinion when every thing starts to pick up the true development because that moment leads to other pivotal ones we’ve gotten so far. Thank you for reading this farTLDR? It’s stable the main character is flesh out and though it’s still early we use budding side characters or supporting characters that could be vital. story moves at a moderate pacing giving you the world background of the world the characters and how everything came to be at the current point in story doing a good job to further help boost its development. All in all you get the info but it’s don just right that there’s still mystery and allure to drag you in
