This is the “Transmigrated to become NPC sand take advantage of players genre”For similar works-The Legendary Mechanic (Sci-fi World)I am a Legendary Boss (Western Fantasy World)And lastly this novel (Xianxia World)Yay. I feel like this genre gets views off of how so many people can relate to being a gamer and getting scammed (or at least it feels like) by NPCs. There’s a similar genre for getting scammed by game creator.
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One of the most amazing game novels I have read so far and from the other novels you have written so far it doesn´t seem to be a novel that will just be ending anytime soon. Pls keep up the good work!
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Especially in the beginning of the novella, let's say the first 50-60 chapters, the writing style was very dry, you could tell that you had no experience. I even wondered if it wasn't generated by artificial intelligence. After that, an undertone began to appear in your writing. But you keep using the main character's name every other sentence...which is very annoying. Use synonyms, speak for him and not in the 3rd person.. there are many options to avoid this annoying repetition. Regarding your writing, in general I like such stories and therefore notice quite a few cons that you could emphasize. The battles are very lean, and the character development is fast-paced. The same goes for the dialogues, which are trite and emotionless…There are also a lot of actions, events that have no logic... such as the watcher, which supposedly cannot be interfered with, and at the beginning it was shown how the contracts under his supervision were secure, but then it turned out that it was not so... which completely contradicts the concept, making this belief absolutely nonsensical. Chapter 291 Revealing The Truth, you say how he wanted to share the responsibility and that's why he trusts gamers he hasn't even seen live. You absolutely trashed your good idea with your organization, you could easily have built it based on mafia organizations or terrorist organizations. Not to mention that there are other secret organizations where they are in different circles. The more you reveal yourself to some, the more vulnerable you become...In order not to ramble on, I'll give some examples where you can see combat mechanics, dialogue, and the ability to keep the reader in suspense. For example Reverend Insanity and Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God. Of course even they are only a good attempt compared to true masters of fantasy, such as Steven Erickson or George Martin.
Hey author are you still alive , you haven’t updated in like two years
Probably one of the best books on webnovel. I have love this book and its way of makeing the mc. I hope the author dosnt drop this book like purple lightning Emperor.
I absolutely love the world background of this book, but I've gotta ask...What were you thinking when you added that random powerful woman who just appeared and did whatever the **** she wanted when all that was happening was him opening his keys? Other than that this book is awesome!
One of the few cultivation novels that actually make a difference.Qin Yun is no cripple, who is rejected by his family, just to rise to sudden power to beat everyone to a bloody pulp.He is also no child, which acts wise beyond his years (Chapter 1 - Age 21).There are no stale cultivation "numbers" (realm 3 stage 10!!) and demonic beasts are not just some sort of currency the MC can use to power up beyond normal means.The world is deserving of being called a Xianxia novel and the means of fighting are colorful - and don't need random manuals of increasingly high grades (mortal/earth/heaven).The MC is neither arrogant, nor cruel beyond common sense. He actually cares about his family and friends (or partner), even after 100+ chapters. They haven't become an afterthought just yet.If you need some wholesome story of cultivation, you should give it a try.
Didn't read the novel but this one has the more votes then the other one that I like so giving it 1 star.140 words word limit is kid of not good.
there is an update,Is this novel back? .
Several years ago,I read it.It's a good story.But I hate Xiaoyan.His name is not good.haha,Xiaoyanyao.haha,And I am a Chinese.卧槽，评论特么还有字数限制。编不下去了。