Mika Elbar's adventure in this magical tale breaks away from typical hero stories. His down-to-earth nature makes him a likable main character, and the mysterious systen adds suspense to the plot. The famous magic academy, Loogam, adds excitement to Mika's journey. The fact that he lacks typical magical abilities or legendary relics makes his underdog story more compelling.Pretty good start to the story. Let's go Aspiring Mangakas community!
I'm not normally one to leave reviews, or even likes on something I read or watch. But every now and then I come across something that compels me to do so. It's good, and you should give it a read. That's all there is to say.
Obviously I'm the Author so I'm gonna give myself 5 stars ;) The chapters will get longer as the book goes on however I want to stay to the theme of a chapter as a write in order to make things easier to understand. This may lead to some short chapters however it will get better I promise
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool, i saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay the stooooooooooooooooooooory why do I need to write so many characters for a review? Im new.
This is a review from Chapter 1 to chapter 16 and so the things I discussed in my review might have been fixed already, writing Quality-2- The sentences could be better. It seems you fond of using 'to' in explaining the motives of actions. Consider trusting your readers. An example can be found in chapter 2. 'Once they had stepped inside, he reached for the button to send them to the ground floor.'This can be changed to'Once they had stepped inside, he reached for the ground floor button.'Another example can also be found in chapter 2.'the elevator chimed again to let them know that they had reached their destination.'This can be changed to'the elevator chimed and the door opened. They had arrived'Using 'to' is a little jarring. Aside from that, sentences can be shorter too. Take this example from chapter 12.'His own path to the office was made simpler by the private elevator that took him straight from the parking garage to the thirty-second floor where his office was.'The sentence is too long. The longer the sentences get, the weaker they are. Shorter sentences are easier to understand. Also better words could have been used in expressing the idea. 'A private elevator eased his access from the garage to his office in the thirty-second floor.'or'A private elevator simplified his access from the garage to his office in the thirty-second floor.'The thing is, readers don't actually want to read. They say they do but that is a misconception. Nobody wants to read. Reading is a tedious process. What the readers want is the information from. So if writers can express a story in a thousand words rather than two thousand, then that would ease the burden of reading. The job of writers is to lull the readers into believing a tale they crafted with the shortest word count possible. Stability of updates- 5- I don't really care much about stability of updates. Automatic 5.Story Development - 3- The story is about falling from heights and rising again with the help of several characters. As of chapter 16, the story is still kicking off which is partly because of the short chapters (which is not a bad thing). It feels like a slice of life novel despite being presented with an interesting conflict. Nothing much is happening. But I can see that the story needs to trek the path of being docile for now. Chance is still adjusting after all. I suggest bringing a few side conflicts to spice this slow beginning. Personality conflicts, backstories, things like that. But honestly, I can't really say much. I've already put the story in my library. I will resume reading soon and hopefully I can make another review after catching up with the latest chapters. Character Design-3- Chance is a broken man. What happened to him was tough. His journey from being broken into rising up again is a little fast in my opinion. Other than that I don't really have problems. World Background- 5- I don't get why Webnovel has this aspect in reviews. World background? What does that mean? If it means magic systems and the worlds in isekais, then what about novels which are not fantasies? They could have replaced this with dialogue or something.Additional notes- I have no qualms about the changing of perspectives. It happened a few times that I thought the perspective is in third person omniscient. But seeing the potential of the mystery surrounding Fait's character and the other mysteries too, I think omniscient point of view is a poor choice. Final score- I added 1 full star as consideration. Webnovels are not published novels after all. 4.6
As many of people said in the comments, Idols are not my cup of tea for two reasons: I've lived in Tokyo and got soo fed up with it and second it is always the same comedy. About the novel, it is actually fun, but you have to like Japanese comedy, otherwise, you just won't get jokes. I personally laughed a lot.Characters are funny and adorable, Araragi kept reminding me of the Monogatari series. And the dark part of my really wanted the whole show to go dark 'à la' Perfect blue... But that's just me, gotta see a doctor :)Overall, if you like reading manage and shonen, I recommend it!
OMG the kdrama names I love them so much because I watch kdrama. Love the characters I knew he still loved her though he pretended not to . Job with this one Author
So far read every chapter. Opinion, unique and thoroughly enjoyable. I'd even go far as to say if you could keep this up for a couple thousand chapters you would have 3 or so seasons of an anime that would be absolutely ******* awesome to watch. I'm impressed, keep this novel rolling Author, I'd take this one all the way.
As a reader, I recommend this story. I think readers will like the story, because it was penned wholeheartedly. That is my honest assessment. Thank you for following this story.
While the synopsis sounded like it would lead to an interesting Claok and dagger style story, instead we get an Isekai.The quality of the writing form a techincal standpoint is better than most stories I have read here on Webnovel, but there are more than a handfull of tiems where the author suddenly switches narrating perspectives, has a few words repeated by what I assume to eb mistake or some tense mistakes.As for the story itself, whiel it starts of interestingly enough, it soon devolves into the same cliche ridden thing as most Isekai stories. Up to this point most characters felt very much one dimensional or proped up by tropes and cliches. The story developed at a decent, but rather slow pace, while the world as shown so far has little to nothign special to it compared to many other Isekais, but has neither anythign obviously wrong with it.All in all I got to say if you want a different flavor of the standard Isekai, this story is better than at elast 80% of what Webnovel has to offer you. If not, it probably isn't the story for you.
An odd translation. A better translation for title would be “Evil God Gonfalon”. No idea why they went with Cthulhu. The translation quality is possibly the worst I’ve seen on QI. The recent chapters are much easier on the eyes and brain....a pretty fun series that is marred by terrible quality and questionable translation choices.
It's a great storyI think it's really unique