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This a great werewolf packed story. It jumps straight into death and tragedy which sets the scene well. All in all a good book with lots of thought gone into it :)
It was quite good! Some of the scenes are quite realistic and the description is good. The plot in itself was quite interesting!
Keep writing and best of luck!
Premature, but I'm sure its pretty
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Not even joking it's the only story so far that I'm enjoying to read... Apart from solo levelling... but that's setting the bar pretty high. xD
You're doing well though! Carry on
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The plot is really good. I haven't read many sci fi books so I don't have much to compare this with but I liked the book :)
Also, there are many punctuation errors especially with your periods and commas so you should go through the book and fixed that.
Keep writing, author!
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great story great mc great battles not so great writing quality with lots of wrong words ana gramma but it dose not affect how good the story and fights are
Good book, premature ending though. Grammar is decent and consistent. The pacing is rather slow and some things are needlessly stretched out in terms of dialogue and descriptions but it could just be personal taste. The mc has a rather unique class in terms of other books that really made me enjoy the entire process of seeing him adapt. Which the author would've expanded more/made more use of the duel skill because it can make for some great action scenes but its possibly he had planned to before he dropped the book. Good book though and definitely worth the read.
