IMMORTAL_ZANE_23
The story development is good and the flow of the story are very interesting making me can't wait for more chapter to update.
Pls guys I'm sorry for not updating any chapters in this past week cause my phone was stolen and I've just bought a new one.
I would endeavor to release more this weekend.
Love you guys and yours forever, Larry.
If you like those stories where the main character goes on adventures in a parallel medieval-like world, then you've come to the right place. What also makes this story unique is that Andrei, the novel's protagonist isn't summoned as some kind of powerful hero. Instead, he tried to figure out his way all by himself.
The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers.
Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!
the novel is great, that the synopsis does not deceive you 10/10?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️??✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️?✍️✍️???✍️✍️??✍️?✍️✍️??✍️?✍️✍️✍️✍️???✍️
tbh it is kinda boring. maybe if you havent read many mmorpg novels you might find it good, but it is same old cliches with slight twist. all buffs turn into debuffs and all debuffs turn into buffs. poison gives health, restoration takes it. comedy is meh and it just turns into another unbalanced mmorpg protagonist with possible harem. i would rate it half a star better than average mmorpg novel on this site.
Your plot is interesting. Writing style is good and your choice of words is amazing. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Keep writing!
It's nice, a little like A Record of a mortal's journey to immortality. Yes so you should try it............ Djbdidhdihdudbfhdhdydyebdhudhdhdhdh
I seriously cannot get enough of this book, it’s utterly compelling to read and the humour is brilliant!! It has made me laugh to tears!! The writing style is amazing, the characters share a fantastic dynamic and the storyline feels very unique and like it is going to warm up to be a really good and interesting one. So far the concepts have really got me hooked, I am so excited to see how thongs will unfold. 100% recommend giving it a read but be aware there is quite a lot of use of profanities. For me I don’t mind as I feel it works in the context of the book but I realise it’s not to everyones liking.
