Good story and amazing flows!
love Zeb ...️
come on we need the rest of the story. I oh so love it yes
The story is about the gorgeous playboy and an average girl. Everything that the FL was saying on her POV are what most girl think... geez. I this is something good. I want more chapters.
awww, this is interesting.
I'm disappointed a little, I feel the ending was really rushed.
currently on chapter thirteen. I love how everything goes, though I don't like Kelsey. She's such a bitch, rn.
I love Nathan, super! He's my dream guy, you know.
Author, can you please, re-write this story and make me as the main character, and Nathan would be the male lead? jk.
New Chapter Update?...
I paid for and read (1) The Mafia’s Good Girl and (2) The Mafia’s Wife and (3) The Mafia’s Daughter and (4) The Teacher’s Pet. Now all those books are vanished from the app. It’s so unfair because I spent a lot of money and enjoyed rereading them because I kept them in my Library where they vanished
great read for weekend. I love it.
After being let down by the hotel dungeon novel, I decided to give this one a shot. However, since it significantly surpasses the previous one (though I'm unsure if plagiarism occurred, as the main character's starting stats seem identical), I won't rate it, as it simply doesn't align with my preferences. The translation isn't perfect, but it's better than many recent reads. I prefer past-tense narration, which this book offers.
The premise initially intrigued me for both novels, but the execution didn't resonate with me. I think the author could improve their writing, as I found myself indifferent to the supporting characters' perspectives when they switched to the MC's point of view. This technique can work, but it should be reserved for significant characters, not every random character seeking to idolize the MC. In my opinion, excessive perspective shifts are unnecessary; a more effective way would be to convey emotions through the MC's actions and reactions.
Additionally, I skipped over the forum posts at the start of each chapter – they added no value and felt like unnecessary padding. Lastly, my personal pet peeve is encountering sentient systems in stories. I've grown tired of reading about characters with no autonomy, direction, and being controlled by a supposed tool. The repetitive nature of the MC being forced to act by their sentient system becomes monotonous.
In conclusion, due to these factors, I've stopped reading. If none of these issues bother you, feel free to give the novel a try. It's just a matter of personal taste.
Fr and they want us to believe a girl would react the way she did, author fr has never talked to a woman