Well I dont want this novel drop author. I have liked the a lot so plz don't stop updating or I might have to come to Indonesia lol!
This webnovel is very nice . It starts off quite slow and a little confusing especially with the double names of the protagonist. But later on in the novel it starts to get interesting and substance is slowly added to the novel. If your looking for a book that is fast paced straight from the start than this novel isn't for you but if your looking for a novel that you can fall in love with slowly or at a normal pace this is perfect for you. The author is very nice and considerate and seems very dedicated and the story goes at a pace that can't be called slow but can't be called fast either.
I really love slice of life stories like this! its so wholesome !!? And author-san did a great job writing! I just hope that he can upload 10 chapters a day???
There is nothing much to story. All the characters are one dimensional. the story even his girlfriend getting forced to another guy. There is only face slapping.nothing else.
A very nice book...captivating and intriguing! The author really has his mind on this book, It's a must-read, I assure you.................................
So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good.Pros1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 462. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand.4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry.Cons1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that. 2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal.3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=¥×#*@£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED.Suggestions: - Tone down the annoyingness of some characters.- Don't put too much THOTS in the story.- No Harem PLEASE!- Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches.-MOAR CHAPTERS.- Don't be discouraged and stay awesome.P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...
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Really great the first couple hundred chapters but it eventually turns from bad to worse. I'm not sure if the writer/author has been changed or if he has no more motivation in his book but it's starting to get milked. long unnecessary descriptions, Stuff that gets pulled into multiple chapters and as of late more POV changes going up to 6 chapters long about unimportant background characters.The way he writes about morality and stuff also greatly changes which makes me believe the author/writer changed. All in all its massive drop in quality. I've stopped supporting his work, I'm no longer paying coins to read.
Excellent story, one of the best ive read on this app, but it hasnt been updated in quite a while. I hope that the author comes back to this because its a great story and sport novels need more content.
ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.
one of the best novel I have read so far, and I read a lot. story development is good, even tho the world building can be a little bit better, but so far so good. character design, is stable, meaning that the MC character, decision, temperament are align with his origin, and age. world background is alright, only lack of its size, since it kinda small for me. total score 4.8