Forteller
Honestly, I was hoping for more from this story. I generally enjoy the cliche of a weakling getting a cheat and becoming powerful. But this story is just mediocre as of chapter 60. Maybe it gets better later on, but I haven’t looked at any reviews from other people, so I don’t know.The translation / editing quality seems to be excellent (very few or no English grammar or spelling mistakes). I can’t speak to the translation accuracy, but the story flows and is coherent. 5/5.The story itself, however, is just meh. The pacing feels rushed. The elders have the same cultivation strength as some inner disciples. Etc etc. 2.5/5.Overall, 3.5/5. It is readable and can help pass the time, but there are tons of other web novels that are more enjoyable to me, so I won’t be voting for this one.
This story revolves around an 'NPC' that holds a hidden identity of being a reincarnator from earth. He is summoned into a territory and slowly increases his strength by farming and chopping trees. The MC is not overly empathetic nor is he cruel, he's just one of those protagonists that have an OP near impossibly durable personality. The story has a relatively slow pace as it describes almost every aspect of the Mc's life from taking a dump to eating a pear. Don't read this story if your counting on character depth though as the only character with any real depth is the MC. Even most of the beasts in this story have a more "real" personality than the other NPCs.
It is a fun read. worth the time
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.............................................................................................................................................................................of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars
This was a huge disappointing waste of time……………Brain dead rage monster MCNonsensical Garbage plotNonexistent character building
This is a story of MC like the Batman in public he is known as rich, famous ,handsome ******* who is carefree and popinjay but not from the begining and in private he is sad and brooding as the batman . This is tragicomedy of story with cool and cunning and smart as batman MC who tries to push away people and get revenge for his friends . I highly recommend this as it's not like the most of the other novels that are too much philosophical on cultivating ying yang and other bs .
its a game but, not really. its another world but the mix of players, again not really. a weird blend which is hard to swallow maybe inedible. and why is this type of novel here again? i thought we were over with this? Now.The Mc has become a Npc which should have been ok IF there were no players.addition of players make me not take it seriously cus its a game. just a GAME i can't read it knowing its all Big BS. maybe later in the story author would make it so that this world is real and things. another problem is that people don't die even dead NPC( others) cant die they will revive, a big down for me because u can't be immersive enough in this because its just unreal.
Did the translator dropped this novel? If he/she did, I would like to ask qindan for a new tranlator. I think a novel like this deserves a dedicated tranlator who can at least upload 7 chapters a week.
my most favourite dongua series ?and also novel .
