The main problem for me is the mc. He is highly incompetent. And just thinking about the opportunity he is missing out on just because of his mindset is pathetic. And at this point others are making more use of his inn and getting stronger than him because he doesn’t understand the features of his own inn. Now it has become more of a charity than inn.
This book is so anticlimactic, sigh, im over it
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Interesting plot developments... An enjoyable, plot twisting storyline... A proofreader would be a definite plus.. An intriguing mix of anime and science based characters...
The story is quite enticing and the concept is superb as well. The author has a good grasp of the English language and clearly has a strong grammatical power. As the author continues to progress I can tell that this novel will become a hit my only complain is the paragraphing issue but that will be solved in a jiffy. Give the book a read its quite interesting.
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Female lead? CheckFunny? CheckGrammatical errors? CheckMa- wait wait wait. its a check? nvm, we all got them, don't we?Great plot and storyline. Hoping for more.
So far, a quite captivating story. I will say that development in the story is slow, but it’s setting up a very promising story thats sure to be full of very interesting plot lines! Best of luck, author.
The novel feels pretty original and well translated. I like the plot as well as the progression so far. I Will continue to read as see how it goes.
I have read up to 37 chapters at the time of writing this review.WQ 5/5 my standards are low if I unfairly compared it to Infinite Bloodcore then 2/5 and that's me being generous.US 5/5 idk SD 3/5 It goes against the title and slightly goes against the synopsis. The story development is good but I fear the author would ruin it in order for the story and title to match. He already killed off one of the male characters. Oh yeah I fear it might become a harem. I just hope Chase doesn't die less it really becomes a "harem".CD 3/5 Unlike others I believe all the side characters are fine. The problem is the main character. All the others have some humanity in them but I suspect the mc is either the child or the reincarnation of a powerful monster/deity/demon/etc. He starts out kind of caring and his murdering of monsters has a good justification yet he could kill a human just as easily and the justification is bad and easily broken. He makes stupid decisions like withholding precious information that could help the team with a dumb excuse such as "they are not ready". He hordes point even if his life might be in jeopardy just so he could "put points during the fight". There were no justifications during the zombie freezer battle and his "inexperience" is not an excuse because common sense exists and he uses it and even mocks his childhood friend with it. Not to mention chapter 36-37 mentions how smart he is when he was a child to be able to notice his childhood friends bad intentions.One of the reviews is right, there are many plot holes but it is mostly on the mc himself.WB 4/5 pretty nice and just like WQ I have a low standard for this otherwise it is the same 2/5 as WQ.
I am loving this story so far it is a 5out 5 the author should keep doing a great job.I cannot wait to see this light novel reach 100s of chapters