What I love about this story is the realistic touch to it, meaning humankind itself is relatable. For example, Mars and technology updating, the lack of resources for humanity and WWIII itself, make this story a gem. Thank you so much for writing this story, plz make more chapters. Keep up the good work.
Updates don't count.Firstly, It had opportunity to be good. But There are too many inconsistencies. The author says one thing and then contradicts itself in next chapter. These are not big contradictions or anything, simply lazy and leaves bad vibes. Nothing major thought. The Author tries to make MC hide strength and in the first few chapters it would have be ok. But it doesn't make sense One and secondly, it makes the world feel stupid.In addition, it is stupid to hide strength than all powerful Ranking system pretty much spills the beans.Lastly, the translation is not good, but it is not bad either.Overall, I would not recommend it.
nice story and keep up the good work.
this is my first project on this site please be respectful thats all i ask, if i made a mistake please point it out and i will do my best to correct it.
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, SciFi, ComedyThis novel is forever free?One chapter per day releaseJust a shameless review for a shameless book from a shameless author?
The world-building and setting development is done really well, and I can see the aspects of Tornado's character:) I really liked SAO, and I can see the inspo from it! some errors, but all in all an amazing zombie story!
Honestly a very entertaining tale, the use of spirit girls is great, and the MC and cast is hilarious. Can't wait for full release.
To be honest I'm almost to chapter 200 and it's become dull. There's no storyline development, so far the whole thing reads like a combat log with some occasional talking. The MC only develops as a fighter and not a person, and I understand this is a combat story but why introduce other characters and have them travel and fight together if he was just gonna be alone. I've grown so tired of the fights that I just skip them.
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I like the story very much :)If you don't want to hear my thoughts on this Novel, then do not read it!Webnovel did something unforgiveable! They didn't even check the chapters...... only 'copy paste' from gravity tales. I read till the 105th chapter, but PayWall hindered me to read more :( . Why, a PayWall starting from the 100th chapters range when the Novel has over 1000 chapters ongoing??! It doesn't even make sense WEBNOVEL!!!!!And 10-14 SS per chapter? It isn't even worth it, because 'copy paste'(i don't know anything about CR).You should've corrected at least every chapter!It isn't flawless, it is full of grammar mistakes and even wrong sentence structure ! Do you intend us to pay for grammar mistakes?
so seriously the mc gave me headaches with his delirium of ''I'm not going to use the system'' I almost quit several times because of it........
The story and writing is really good. characters are interesting and early signs of world building shows promise. The only major problem is once you start paid chapters there are a lot of problems with inconsistency. titles, names, and gender pronouns switch and change frequently. This is a quality issue. I don't know what happened but this isn't acceptable.