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The girl looked at that view in silence. Then with a violent shake of her head she stared down again. "Sorry, I got caught up in memories." She quickly picked up the phone. "Just tell me if I'm boring, will you?" Her smile turned into a smirk, but then a mischiveous light glimmered in her eyes and she grinned widely. "You know I miss you. We were supposed to share this day together you know."
it's a good novel with a nice Cheat but MC one second laughs and in the next second He wants To kill smb because they asked a question and then He IS all Happy again wenn smb els ASK a question sems bipolar To me idk He should get IT checked
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First, writing quality. Its not good. Its readable, but as everything in this book it degrades as the book goes on. The grammar is all over the place.Cant really say much about updates, since I just binged 260 chaps. But doesnt look too bad.(this part may contain some spoiler, but I dont name anything specific.)Story... horrible. The first part is very nice, a lot of world building and focus on magic, somtimes some romantic scenes with his wife, and at some point he gets a second girl. So yeah, its ******** harem. But later on it just turns into badly written sex every single chapter and at some points the story just straight up repeats itself. Just SAY that his "essence" can heal everything magic related. It starts as a nice magic novel with some sex and romance every now and then and after 250 chaps its a badly written ero novel that sometimes justifies why he gets a new woman. Author if you read this, a harem with more than like 5 people just loses any sort of romance and is a plain ****feast. Which is fine, but then make it sound like its a ero novel and not a fantasy one.Character are the same as story, they are pretty nice in the beginning and get shallow in the end, World background as well, but it got built pretty nicely in the beginning. All in all, badly written, story degrades, has some inconsistencies every now and then, but the story itself had potential. It was nice until the like 3rd wife came.
............................................................................................................... The story is very difficult to read because of the inconsistent writing
This author is named TapWater (named after through some unfortunate events that will be given through the right time and place in the future) so are some of my introductions. I am still a student, but through some weird kinks and undoubtable stupidity happened to write a novel seemingly out of bounds.Now first of all, english is my second language and currently appears to be having issues to grammar (so bear with me). This is my first time writing a novel as was inspired by many many other creations thus leading me to this predicament. Third releases and word count can be inconsistent or until I have managed to pass my exams in the near future and if so manage to have a schedule of releases that will post to a discord channel that I suppose create in the near future until I won't appear inconsistent. Fourth this is "first time" (in a public setting) writing so expect plot holes and stuff the novel will be generalized to that of Reincarnation, Sci-fi, Magic and Stuff, System and etc. and Fifth yes the MC will appear to be OP as he is my generalization of many private works that I have done so expect that one.Currently as of now, I will be inputting many if what happened to my social life and my interactions through various games currently for example the name of the MC and his current Title is synonymous to my IGN of -RenegadeAegis- but for easy shotcalling in game chat turned it to just Rene and so expect other references from other games and novels (just a wee bit) to expand the plethora of concepts currently in the novel.So expect that my novel to be both cringy and pls bear with it.**: I am very punny and my constitution and mentality is similar to that of a Bear. Have fun and Enjoy!
very intresting .............can't wait to read more..........................................................................................................
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Errmmm what should I even write. Everyone knows I'm bad at giving reviews.lolFirst of all, I love the story. Reading it made me remember all the good times I had there.?I learned a lot though. The gr8 Nixxie advised me and I couldn't be more grateful.❤I realized that all those big authors we see aren't rude and they're really nice people.Secondly, you must read it!!!! I mean why not. Don't you want to know what your fav. Author is like behind close doors???Lastly, A cute girl like me is in how can you not read huh???Lol. Don't forget to support the author tho??
first of all, the name of the novel is misleading. he is anything but a loner. in one second you cannot see much until you are flash. it may be useful when he himself gets faster. i didnt understand the mechanism of him using hus power for increasing his pain tolerance. plot holes are so big, if the holes were a little closer, it would have merged to form a new road. the author has a good visualization power but he didnt grind it out. there are glaring mistakes, portraying a character in words and in action differently. they dont match how the author described them a little earlier.the most annoying is the '' loner '' part in the name.
Just finished all curently released chapters(460) and i need moral support to deal with this... i want to read more and to know more .. Its a very good read with its ups and downs .. I concluded that the story is very deppresing full of betryal and twists..
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.