Blakcherry
I started reading this because I like medical novels. It’s pretty good and I’ll definitely recommend it. The only annoying thing for me is that the MC cannot really stand up for himself and has a low EQ but I can deal with that.
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This fanfic is greater but it's no for me, yeah I like opmc and when I see the synopsis I was catch by it but the 4th chapter began to downfall for me, because. the "mc" gave both of his parent the future of him and making them know who he was. and it was huge turn off for me because why would he do that? because it's his parents? well he could just make both of them safe right? so why would he do that? there will be no time paradox because he controlled time itself, so he can secure that his other of him will not have a system, because he is "one" or Omnipresent you might say.the 3rd chapter was good because he become omnipotent being, he became the strongest being in the story so it will become good but.... it ruined for me I don't know if you guys like it.{[This is just my Opinion]}
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I like everything. I don't care about the grammar because I read worse (Chinese fanfic and translated through Google translate) and so all well interesting idea and yes I also do not know English well. But the piece itself is good
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One of my favourite novels out there. Plot and Character Building is amazing. And I think this novel is underrated as the novels with better ranking then it and the same genre is inferior to this novel Quality. May be this is because of updates delay but I love this novel.
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Typical plot where a chick comes in and just hangs onto the main character's legs and he just accepts it instantly how disappointing. Doesn't help either as he is also poor when he got transmigrated it's just so easy to guess what happens from then I'm just...
The basis of this is that a loser dies and his body is inherited by someone who is a REAL IMMORTAL CULTIVATOR. The cultivator Izoroth then instead of become badass in real life getting immortality and fame and money. NO he wants to play video games. BULLSHIT. He can probably use real magic and martial arts that are cool as hell why for any reason would he instead go and use FAKE mage and martial arts in a video game. If I could fly do you think I would be playing a superman or ironman game. **** no i would make a **** load of money with the military bombing people. Or some altruistic hero **** is what i mean.
Ang gandaaaa nh story,another episode of walang tulugan nanamn itooo!
Love to read it
