CloverNine
I love the first book of the serie and the first half of this book. It's a great story but the second part of the book have 3 or 4 diferent stories running with the same characters changing and confusing names, repeating some chapter of the first half of the book. Hoping for the author review
Love this book when is the next chapter dropping
really wish another writer could pick this book up and finish it
Don’t pay for the bonus chapter. It is blank.
The Story is so captivating and interesting. I want Sylvia to make Gray pay before she accept him back. He never give her the chance to explain herself and I hate him for that.
More Chapters please!!!!!
Wow, I was glued to my phone until I finished reading, it is different and I love it
Your story is really great! You have a great way of narrating your story and your characters are realistic. Good job and keep writing! ?
39 chapters 6/10/23
The term "mediocre" doesn't even begin to capture it. It lacks substance; there's truly nothing here. It's bland and unengaging, with no coherent storyline. Ting Shuang just follows Bai Changyi around without doing anything substantial – come on! She should have a life beyond chasing after him. He constantly complains about his college struggles and confusion, yet he fails to put in the effort to study. He only devotes himself to work on Saturdays. So why isn't he studying? It's just not satisfying for me. There are numerous other novels out there, far superior and more concise, like "Heart of a Smith" (an amazing tale), "Rent vs. Love," "Tattoo," "Gua Men," and "Moumou," which is a bit longer but undeniably better.
The main character seems quite feeble, which can be quite frustrating. If you're seeking intense, dramatic moments with a strong, heroic figure, this might not be your cup of tea. It feels more like the character is constantly needing rescue, akin to a damsel in distress.
Alternative titles I thought of for this novel:
-Depression and Harem (The Web Nobel)
-Throughout All Heaven And Earth, I Alone Am The Hated One
-My Death Flags Show No Signs Of Ending
-The Main Villainesses Are Trying To F*ck Me
-Guide to Becoming a Villain
-Good People Must Suffer
Seeing the first two comment that catched my eye, it seems to be a promising read. So, I'ma gonna read it.
