OverlordOfDeath
First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.Pros:-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!-The title of the book is great and unique.-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.Cons:-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.
pretty good overall. but it really needs an editor. there are spelling mistakes and mistakes in what word is written often enough that it really affects your ability to enjoy the story. if you can get past it, then it's a worthwhile read.
I Love it's not a big deal but I don't have ah phone again and I hope you have a great day and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same place as last time I don't recommend it to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for my bro
I love this novel. It's an interesting story with excellent storytelling. It has the making of a story that simply yearns to satisfy your desire. It's a fun apocalypse novel with some game elements added in to make it funnier. You won't find any of that cringe about protagonists and their personality, never questioning what the MC does, he just does it. He doesn't have to explain the scientific knowledge about his actions, and if you have any questions, the author answers them in the comments. It's fun and tells the story of a guy being himself. He's just himself, not some cold guy who kills everyone for the lady kind of random cringe with lots of dark thoughts. There is not any filler like in other novels, when there an enemy we don't have to bore through several texts of how some guy fights his zombies. We get to see the outcome. Fun! Keep it succinct!
Dont waste your time. Only the first 50 chapters are interesting and nice character development between mc and heroin until an annoying girl gets introduced and unnecessary comedy starts where mc also makes unreasonable things like helping the girl when she constantly only made his life harder. The story literally has filler this early in the story with annoying comedy.
Your talent is clear hun.... writing is definitely your calling
Started reading and found that it has some good potential but I didn't really enjoy it much after he met the main side character who may or may not be a love interest? It just dulled the story to me.
Author here so of course I rated my own work with 5 stars. check out what I have written so far. I plan to release chapters regularly. Hopefully you will enjoy.
It’s amazing!! The character development and the pace of the story are very good. The story in itself is incredible. A few grammar errors here and there but otherwise it’s one of my favorite stories rn. Keep it up Author-san!!
GUYS HEAR ME OUT THE EUNUCH NOVEL WAS THE COPY OF THIS EUNUCH NOVEL.
SO THIS EUNUCH NOVEL IS THE ORIGINAL THE OTHER ONE IS A COPY ...
ALSO THIS EUNUCH NOVEL IS MUCH MUCH BETTER THAN THE OTHER EUNUCH TRASH
Amazing novel author keep up the good work but please we need update so please an please always update the novel please...............................
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