Esta muyyyyýyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bueno me encantaría seguir leyendo esta historia muy bien elaborada. Bueno llegando a este punto espero que cuando comineze la historia principal no se tan rápida sino que incluya más detalles.
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Very good story upload more chs plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssss
Hey Guys, I am the author of this book and firstly I must say that webnovel is an amazing platform which helps put my ideas out to the world and secondly about my book J want to tell everyone that the first three chapters in my book are not paragraphed and because of that the story looks bulkier but after the first 3 chapters the writing and paragraphing will get on track so, please do not quit reading the book after the first three chapters! With that said I hope you read my book and enjoy it.
Small review right here, I think this book is amazing, yeah first 40 chaps shows Author's inexperience, but it obviously becomes better, and after 50 chaps it is amazing to read. Good job Author!
Story and plot is good i hope mc won't be like edgy chinese novel mc's
i like how a nice guy he is , and i don't see problem at the overpowered mc good work keep going :)
I only read synopsis and u had to choose one of the most pathetic ways to die
The story started off strong, and snagged my attention from the beginning . The pacing and the quality of this novel are also pretty good. The first couple of chapters reveal why the mc has his nickname “ The Martial Arts King”. Everything from the action scenes, to the various environments are described in depth(which allows my imagination to soar). Another thing I noticed was that the side characters introduced, threw me through a loop. They acted differently than what I was expecting, and I really enjoyed that. I’m excited to see how the Celestial Fist Tournament plays out.
old mechanism based style and design ,just like any rpg game and what's the use of the players initial data if it is not used during game
The s rank abilities are just for show when everything is gonna reset during game
enjoyable novel... good for relax time reading. story is good and well engaging...and important one is not boring. the story keep audience in mood for expecting next storyline
During the first chapters I really felt that this is gonna be a really interesting story.
But there are so many things I really have trouble to understand.
1. The author constantly jumps between scenes often without any intention of coming back to it.
2. In 41 chapters tons of ppl got introduced only to be completely left behind without further attention.
3. The reasoning and the hole chapter with Undine is imo terrible, especially when it comes to reasoning and behaviour of characters.
4. The storyline is in complete chaos because nothing is explained(except for some game mechanics), I can't even try to judge the world background because nothing is explained be it about the game world or the real world. The reader is constantly kept in the dark.
While I think this could be a really good story, the behaviour of almost all characters feel childish and immature.
For example Qianna(not sure about her name, the girl our MC saved from Aaron) was stronger than Aaron but after their first fight she never tried to get rid of him when he repeatedly attacked the MC. The only thing she'd did was watching and calling of "Watch out!".
The list of unreasonable behaviour goes on and on and I don't understand why it is written like that. It takes away a characters credibility and makes it look laughable.