Would recommend to a first time cultivation reader. Would not recommend to a avid action adventure reader.
Has a good start, some interesting cultivation methods and realistic love interests(at first); the pace pulls you right in. Took me over a 200ch to pull away and realize how lacking this novel is.
MC has all good points and no bad points(his negative aspects are written positively); not realistic or relatable he is more like a cardboard superhero. I can't remember him ever fighting an opponent stronger then him, he just doubles his power and stabs everything with nakama power then it dies.
The world building is pathetic; limited to the mc explaining some facts he found in books in two chs.
The storyline is the typical; cultivators vs demons vs beasts vs otherworlders. With typical sociopathic humans helping the enemies. Had a lot of potential but everyone is just a stepping stone for mc to kill with character building.
Not much happens and it is full of typical cliches; the dialogue makes me want to throw my phone its so dry. Again not realistic.
The MC saves the main love interest during a life and death mission and the author even takes time to mention how she isnt the weak minded type of girl that falls head over heels over hero types at that moment. Like 10chs later they are living together. An inconsistant story imo with paper personalities.
whitesnow you are already one of my favorite authors I'm coming from your other book , I caught up with latest chapters and came here to read another great work from you
please just don't drop any of these two books
you know how to write a good plot with an awesome harem ( with actual romance + Charecter development + no forced love )
and it's really refreshing the only problem is the lack of chapters but that's not your fault , your not a machine so please continue your excellent work and good luck ☺
I like it very much.
I guess this will be another masterpiece , as always a great inheritance power , waiting to be awakened , the character design is great as great as world building and even its just 10 chp~ but iknow it will be another awesome journey.
Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.
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I must say the description do not do this book justice.
so far nothing much as happen as of chp21 will write a proper review when I have more details.
If you are going to steal a novel, then don’t take it from the site it’s based on, or change the title or something, not cool.
If you are going to steal a novel, then don’t take it from the site it’s based on, or change the title or something, not cool.
If you are going to steal a novel, then don’t take it from the site it’s based on, or change the title or something, not cool.
If you are going to steal a novel, then don’t take it from the site it’s based on, or change the title or something, not cool.
I gotchu #spiderman #love ya story.........................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Still one of the best stories I have in my library, I definitely will wait for the author to return and finish this story. I hope you will take this work further and farther.
I really liked the story and even the relationship between the two of them are healthy! The system helps the MC a lot but the MC also genuinely cares about the FL and tries his best to make her happy! It warms my heart!!!! So much fluff and even the interaction between friends and family is hilarious "Single dogs~" lol haha! They have good communication, no dumb misunderstandings, no dragging out even we don't have random face slapping and everyone is so cooperative! Truly it is a rare breed! If you are sick and tired of the dumb misunderstanding and haughty characters with -90 IQ I recommend reading it! Its a breath of fresh air! So rare to see healthy relationships in Chinese novels! So yeah And author-san please update! I need to see what happens!!!!! My precious characters! I can't wait!
I REALLY think that the reason for having so few votes its because the art of the cover, it gives the vibe of being too flowery, not eye catching enough? idk but with a longer synopsis and a better art cover it might RISE, I really hope so, I mean the translator and editor seems like they are very hard/working and it may be a shame for them to not be able to bring us this story that looks promising, I also think that they have put a LOT of effort on this project. This is my sincere opinion, I may be wrong though...