Current rank 1, idk if it’s relevant at the time your reading this.
The problem with Chinese mc is they're too arrogant, prideful and they don't think of the consequences that will happen because of the action they took.
Same with the villains they're all young masters that can't take a single grievance and will always take revenge, after they are killed there comes the father and then the whole clan, after that comes their ancestors that the whole world thought are dead but are secretly cultivating in some places for breakthrough to another level.
what kind of stupid motherfucking idiot of an MC is this anyway. the asshole died in the hands of a beautiful woman and even after reincarnation, the bastard keeps all women around him like a flock even if they want to kill him. the author is a motherfucking masochist.
The story developed fast, and it’s rushed there’s a lot that could have happen, but I still like it so it’s 6.8/10
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I like how the FL's character development seems to progress visibly. I really want to know when she'll turn into her previous cunning and scheming-self uwu
The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.
Not enough world back ground I feel like this is a mix of full metal alchemist world with the seven deadly sins homunculus but there called the seven nightmares. .... many stolen names and ideas from other famous creators shows that you could have just made up yourself to save the trouble. Literally have one punch man written word for word in your novel bro that’s just plain stealing. Forced plot of moving from one organization to another to fast no consistent power scaling literally everyone is at the same power level. Trash mc being put through so much stressed to further your plot cause you don’t know how to write a story just about him. Too many full metal alchemist rip offs what was the point of having all his arms and legs ripped off bro do you know what phantom limb pain does to you I don’t care how strong. A rapper is you should be going through something when you forcibly get your limb cut off.
Dad forced to die Cause no one orginization can keep him safe for long.
My advice to you is stop stealing sit down for a second and make your own story bro cause I’ve read it somewhere else
instead of a review, I will give an excerpt that made my day!)
With these two people, it will be difficult for you not to get promoted and get rich."
"So, I accidentally hugged two thick thighs?"
"Yes, you are between these two thighs, you will definitely be able to rise to the top and become the pillar of our Zhonghai City!"
Ye Feng was suddenly lost in thought.
Between the legs?
Then what am I?
Good stuff! Give me more of that. My heart cannot stand the small amount of chapters. I want more
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MC IS A SIMP NO Doubt !
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