The title looks intriguing, but the MC's character had no development or those things since it is only five chapters.I really do hope the MC grows for he seems to be so motivated to do this for his granddaughter even though his powers made me confused.
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I like the premise of Save State. It gives room for a lot of experimenting with different Timelines. I have only read two chapters so far but I do enjoy the concept.Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.
One more story about profession. It is like fresh air in compare to boring slapping novels. Director, producer promoter jobs and so on, it looks relatively realistic so you can be absorbed into story flow. And I definitely want more chapters to read.
This is a great story, very interesting unique idea. Hope author keeps on writing this story. Story is quite emotional and just insanely good overall.
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overall great story plot and different writing style than what I've seen in other stories here. excited to see where you go with this story :)
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Good start Mr. Gagan.This story work should not only ends up to this level, but goes for higher level for lyrics writing. And your name should be rememberd to each and every person.