Applied a fix to chapter 7 where I forgot to mention that Sally is Elijah's sister. ...
New fixes should be visible within the next 48 hours (hopefully) once my editor approves them. Thanks for reading! ...
so far, my favorite! ...
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Please update more chapters author
What the hell the author has slowly became insane from chapters 400-700.
It’s not chapters anymore it’s list.
After chapter 200 you will no longer be able to take this seriously (well i never have) but this is on a different level. Instead of investing things to write this novel properly, the author just gave up like an artist looking back on his portrait and realizing the proportions are wrong, instead of fixing it the author just splashed bottles of paint in it like he doesnt care. Skip the tower and the worldwide competition since they basicaly have no value to the story. Thats 150 chapters wasted. 150 chapters of list of powers, list of upgraded powers. List of countries. The whole story became a list. I usually love information overload but this is on a whole new level. Lazy overload and reliance to b*llsh*t maybe. The author has forgotten to take the novel seriously as there are dbz references every single chapter and fart jokes. Comedy for 5 year olds.
Finally finished it!!!
My only criticism about this novel would be that, the story could have been way better without Gu linglong
So... When's the first time intercourse will happen?
The story was not bad. At first I did not want to continue, but because I was curious about the ending, I continued reading the finished story for the first time.??
I think my whole family are villains
Thousand years old granny is a child sure goober
Omaghad what a great novel, I was skimmingthroughall the novels here and i saw that this one has farely good reviews. I tried it and it never dissapoints me. This one i s practically a gem for all romantic novels, great plot, great character development, all the characters are very much alive like their are living in the same planet as us. Some details were forgotten to be involve like when Ning Xi is shooting other films but i dont really mind. Cute child rearing and wife pampering hahaha. Overall its a must read hehe thank you author for this novel. I hope for more amazing novels from you. Fighting