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So yeah I'm not gonna go into details because someone else already did but I just wanna say that you should really read this book if you're looking for a real sect development story with little to no cliche and above all a slow and steady story instead of a fast paced one where mc becomes op just in 2 chapters. yeah so that was a little long but who cares. continue like this author you're doing a great job.
I don’t know where the author disappeared to but this was quite interesting. Definitely recommend............................................
How do I say this? The MC don't have MC Quality at all. Only handsome but totally not MC material. I read to Chapter 3 and well, not worth my time.
Jack and his system is what could be categorized as an old and ancient cinnamon buns. There is only a few chapters as of current but I think it deserves some credit for writing a unique story in its genre.The mc is wise and knowledgeable and it's interesting to have a person with the mind of a veteran appeared to act realistically because of the culture shock and not just a plain one dimensional character. Although as of current the mc doesn't have a clear goal other than trying to survive with bruises and weak body(it's still around 12 chapter this review got written). It serve as a foundation of power development where Jack Armstrong could rise and be at his prime again.The system have a lot of potential with how it's displayed. It's like an rng autogrowth in a roguelite, affected by many factor like environment, trait, aggressiveness, where the tentacle is given a random perk everytime its Mutagen has successfully created a mutated ability.There is only few legit fighting action but that alone shows that the mc knows what he was doing although nervous because of the different logic in this world. So if you want some good action with reasonable mc, this book is for you.Still fresh but there is no sign of murkiness, it's going to get clearer and clearer as the time goes on. Because there is not a single info dump given and that's good.5/5, reccomended and still waiting for chapter
This story blew me away. The world building is amazing, Jack is such an enthralling character, and even the side characters are well developed. The power system is unique and this entire story is so good that I am desperately hoping that the author keeps writing, and it gets the attention it deserves.
I enjoyed how brief this synopsis is. Its such a great plot, the writer has made an amazing story. I totally enjoyed the very first few chapters of it. Big up.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I am sorry author but after the addition of the Qi shan, the story became irritating to read and after investing so much time and keys into the chapter, I am meeting with this disappointment. I even waited that maybe the character is only irritating at the start but oh man even after 10 chapter, she and mc is as irritating as ever. And because of Qi shan, Mc's interactions with other characters like house spirit or his teacher is also getting irritating and cringy, sorry but I don't it was a nice idea to add Qi shan here.
for everyone who wants to read the MTL: Eternals of the Wizarding World. .............................................................................................
strangely I feel like this author is the same one with the author of global reincarnation ,................................,.................