hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
It might be good but the references are annoying
Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody else have given a review for this yet? Let me give you five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for your next works ???
the novel echoes of an Empire is the true story outline of all the circumstances behind the downfall of these business empires
Author here. just want to point out that my novel has many issues but i plan to keep improving. if you see any area that i could do better, feel free to tell me, either here or in my discord linked in the synopsis.
Ok writing, ok story so far, a little confusing at first but I think it could get better.
Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of. Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.
Toda la idea es muy genial pero hasta el capítulo que voy actualmente no me va gustando mucho... El nombre de la novela y la reseña son buenas pero la historia hasta el momento no tanto... Tiene la habilidad de copiar o robar habilidades pero hasta ahora no lo usa mucho... Y en su segundo despertar... Llamemoslo así... Ya pasó más de 1 mes cazando bestias o monstruos o lo que sean... Y no copio exactamente sus habilidades... Cómo al inicio lo hizo... Claro que extrajo algunos atributos... Pero también debería hacerlo con sus habilidades... Y lo hasta el momento me parece que el protagonista se volvió más idiota... Y en mi personal no me agrado mucho que siempre tuvo personas que prácticamente lo iban vigilando... Espero que no siga siendo así ya que supuestamente está muerto... Igual seguiré leyendo por el momento
Haven't read it yet but I have high expectations. You ask why? There is no female protagonist and no romance. You don't see these two side by side every day. I hope the story is good and another wish is that this story won't be paid later.
I adore your writing ❤️. Every word, every character, and every scene you create touch the heart of readers .Your attention to detail, the depth of your characters, and the emotion you illustrate is commendable. Please keep on writing waiting for your next upload . Xoxo ?
synopsis made me remember "my pick up artist system" novel, what an art it was but sadly dropped. I will add this for now and read it when there are more chaps.
Delicious. Stand proud, Forteller. You can cook.