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good novel welled enjoy ??????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Overall good start with great potential some dialogues feel cliche though but its pretty interesting and unique, lets see where it goes in future.
This had some potential but author screwed it up with a completely nonsensical magic system and world building that suffered because of it.
best light novel, everyone must read this.
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its a really nice read with a great storyline i am waiting for the next chapter!!!!! pls upload soon! i really enjoyed the story and the first chapter keeps u hooked throughout
Idk I just saw there’s a cool title so I clicked on it
i like the idea of this one but i feel as if some is missing but I'll do this sandwich style. this does drama really well. my favorite moment is our mc facing her father and his new family and even the ML's drama with both her family and his own. however it doesn't feel like the Mc story, in fact how she and the Male Lead met doesn't make sense Sense she broke and he's a rich person with no backstory other than " i know that he hates my dad and he agreed to married me and cares for me despite not knowing anything."if it was the male lead who approached her after finding out who she was it would be more logical sense a. he is wealthy thus being able to approach and make it set her into the current position in the story, be attentive towards mc make him express his to this point naturally. but besides the mc plan and ML's feeling towards her feeling unwarranted, the story and characterss are very well written and i would have loved to seen the story from the male lead perspective to see what allowed the mc to approach and convincr him to this plan. i left off on chapter 10 but i look forward to seeing if things make more sense later on or not, but as always good job author
This story has a lot of potential. Just hope author explains more on the lore, empires, magic and Mc’s origins
The story is really a fantasy, most people crave for, I am able to enjoy the characters development and most especially the world, my mind does pretty well imagining what u trying to create. I feel the story twist will get more wilder
a nice novel with an amazing story! Completly recommanded to read.
Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book
