Who are those down voting this novel. This is a good one to be honest. It seems after reading a couple of novels some people fancy themselves the authority when comes to how an MC should behave. Its kind of like watching football fans rage about how a player does on a field when non of them can display up to 50% of the skills of the players they attack.
Very unique plot, also lowkey, there is a constant suspense of wether the mc will be able to keep this person he cherish with him or not, it draws you to keep reading to find out what is going to happen, it has very good potential!
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An interesting concept though the writing needs a little polishing I suggest Grammarly, helps with my own atrocious writing, you perhaps went a little over the top with the rape and selling of children perhaps dial down his cruelty a little or redirect it 2 fold to adults it makes it more endearing.
How are you going to put a novel into trial reads without any chapters? 5 chapters only already sucks, but pushing a waiting list into trial reads with literally (at the time of this review) 0 words to read outside of the synopsis isn’t a trail read, it’s a glorified placeholder at best, and a way to inflate trial reads numbers at worst. Cut this out or I’m going back to Royalroad and Scribblehub.
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