Im kinda scared to start reading cuz all of your other books are on hiatus and im worried that you are gonna put this one on hiatus and start another book so i was wondering if the same was gonna happen to this book later and you start another book or if you are gonna keep with itPlease reply author and quell my worries ?
Eh just extremely awkward and off putting of all things a Isekai into a magical fantasy DnD style world but he's a Sun Elf whose a wannabe Cowboy and Sun Elf's being Natural race supremacitst and he's awkwardly trying to not be a supremacist and lash out and any and everyone... and changes his voice to Johnny Cash's.... it's good grammer wise but everything else is just a jumbled mess of hot garbage that just doesn't feel like a coherent fic feels like a 12 year old wrote it after thinking up Awkwardly Snobby Elf Cowboy as a daydream.... if you don't mind the awkwardness of that duality I guess it could be decent but as is absolutely not worth the time wasted reading all but the last chapter currently released kinda wish I could forget this last 10-20-ish minutes just... Why? Quality of writing is the only saving grace for this fic IMO 1.8/5 and the only bcause QoW is 5/5 the rest 1/5 imo
Hello author, I saw harem tag in this novel and I havent read this novel yet.I have some question is the MC a demon? if yes, then will his wives be a demon or human? I just hope its not human so its unique :)
hi Africa Leveling author here, just wanted to say if you love this novel i appreciate that and also i have been learning to draw for the past 8 months ,i can make a webtoon not pro but just enough to show you the scenes. But the problem is that I don't know where to post, it took me 2 years to discover webnovel as the greatest platform ever. maybe if i had friends I'd know alot
Writing Quality: The author writes the novel in a way where there is enough humor but also not leaving out the action bits which is a pretty good balance and other than that, the writing quality overall is just pretty easy to understand.Stability of Updates: I'm putting a 3 star since I'm not sure why there aren't any new chapters as of now or if the author has gone into hiatus.Story Development: The story is really good at showing the progress the MC has been doing and also the side-characters are regularly updated to what the novel is on.Character Design: I'd say this is probably the best part of this novel as the MC is always progressing however he has problems that arise and once he takes care of that, he grows equivalent to the danger of what he solves. The side-characters have their own quirks and they dont randomly do things out of impulse unless they were really agitated.World Background: There aren't many plot-holes however personally I think that some parts of the novel definitely need to be more clearly defined. (I'm mainly talking about the demons)Btw english isn't my first language so sorry if some parts seem weird.
This is slightly better than garbage.You think its a good story because it actually is.And then it unfolds its true colors. Another generic story with forced plots and a world setting all centered for the sole purpose of introducing new girls and attaching them to the protagonist.The protagonist who doesn't lose in a fight. Who has the drive to survive. And the protagonist who becomes a spineless pushover who can't say no to a girl because of forced plot reasons.His maid, his fiance, even the so called cold blooded princess who forces him to be her consort, ruining his life due to plot reasons and other things. Yet he does nothing.You think the plot is good but it all boils down in the end to the protagonist, who was a 5 star with his confidence and intelligence, walking into a bear cave (metaphorically) for one reason or another and once the bear is a woman, he becomes completely idiotic and turns into a 1 star.And not in the sense that he is flustered by women, but in the sense of the author forcing the story that way just to mame drama.The whole world setting, politics, demons, and all conflicts are in meaningless because they are all there just to collect more women to showcase them.Romance barely exists as the protagonist has the EQ of a stone and its so obvious how the author just turns him to an unaware idiot just to keep his forced "girl has feeling for him plot nb.29" from falling appart.Its infuriating to the least because I thought it was a good story with tense action and drama as the protagonist is established to have a forced weak state from the start and a death timer, forcing him to keep going forward... but then its all meaningless the moment you realize its all a hoax just to add and collect girls, not for the protagonist to have any romance for, but to just make it another generic harem garbage.A story written not for the sake of the story, its world and its characters, but for the sake of being another junk food platter. Its soggy fries at most.3.5/10
Omg! The opponent from other school was a bully and he was intimidated by his intellect. Thank goodness, they won the price! Meeting him again doesn’t really look good but I trust John to be strong.This book is impressive.More chapter please.
Hi author! i'm at the 75 chaptet and I wanted to know when Chari will come back? Since I know it's an MC it's impossible that he end at volume 1. Otherwise it's a great and refreshing story! i'm in into duo MC who are brothers right now, and you're novel is what i needed! By the way sorry for my english, i'm not used to write comments.... Anyways thank you again for this story, and I hope to continue following you on your journey!
nice one. a bit slow. but i still recommend reading it.
"So, i'm not suppose to tell you if i do turn back the time?"
And so, oh wait I did trip! I forgot... shit I don't like remembering that... it was terrifying I was there I stared at him he saw me then glared for some reason and I walked backwards for some reason and tripped on my long hair idk why I was born with a child's body with hair long as Rapunzel okay???
"Better. Just needed to clear my head." Looking around the property he continued, "Pretty easy to do, with how peaceful this place is."