wow it's beautiful beginning, the synopsis it's great, i can't wait to the next chapter
Honestly based on what I'm reading so far this book has alot of potential and I'm gonna stick with it while you grow as an author cause it's super satisfying to read.
Pretty interesting novel so far - I appreciated how it starts and builds up the 'entity,' slowly giving him character and showing how different he is from people.
An absolutely stunning opening, breath-taking action, and fighting ingenuity. This story is well balanced, though it's a shame the chapters are quite short, but I held my breath reading so far. Have to say the world-building is truly captivating too.
I love this novel. It's funny how the writer uses phrases like it was a real life story. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
So I thought I would throw this in here as a little questions page.• I make daily updates on this book. Sometimes it will be two chapters one day, sometimes it will be only one 1500 chapter that day.• Main characters name is pronounced AIR-em • I am also going through and editing all of the previous chapters that are currently out. I’m still a learning wither so every time I learn something new, I apply it.• If you decide to read this book as I write it you can watch the story grow or something.Thank you for reading this! Hope you enjoy my book!
Nice novel. Intricate characters and stuffs. A really nice book for the family. The descriptions need some work and the usage of words though but overall, it's great. Keep up the work author
This story marks a lot of improvements over my first one, which I thought was pretty decent. The mc, Devon, has a pretty messed up backstory. I mean, your own father eating you is kind of insane. Then you add on to the fact that his villagers cheered and yeah.He is honestly a crashout. Yes, he is still very capable of love. He loves his brother from his old life, his mother from his new life, his dragon he finds a decent bit in, and eventually the Elven waifu Jehrya.But he is definitely out for revenge. If you think this will be a novel where he forgives his father, for better or worse just know that is not true.The anti hero tag absolutely fits. Although Devon is seen by some as a liberator, many also see him as a devil, demon, etc.During the story he tames pretty much every beast using his corruption skill.And there's a crazy twist way further in. Probably gonna take you guys a few years to reach it, so be nice to me or I'll spoil it right now ;).
Author here. I noticed some authors leave out some information about their stories in the review section, so I guess I'll be doing it too.1st: Nope, it's not just a showbiz story where the MC transmigrated to a normal survival show. It's about showbiz influenced with fantasy elements.2nd: There could be graphical descriptions. They're technically zombies, lol. Tho it would be minimal.3rd: I strive not just for my MC to develop, but the other characters too. They're a group of previously dead people. Expect chaos.4th: No romance for the MC. Other characters do though.5th and last: Happy reading!
interestingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Very nice......................
I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.