your story is good you just have to become better at this I mean you could add many thing in this you can make him rainbow something like medical fox with the power of ninetales fox but he can go beyond that with your imagination
This novel is brain rot, so if you like that go for it. At first I thought the author was trying to be clever by writing a dumb protagonist through his own point of view but as he ‘upgrades’ his intelligence stat, he continues to make extremely poor choices. This is just a Chinese urban novel set in America. Decide for yourself if you want to read.
New story with lots mystery really eagerly waiting for new chapters updates i really like your writings in your both the novels eager wanted to read further story please do your best and update asap❤❤
I love myself.Drop the Novel if you think its bad for you.Still kinda new to writing so no idea how good it is.Slow chapter releases due to lots of reworking.Story might start slow, I am unsure.Character design is standard I guess?World background might overwhelm you.(Don't take my word for it.)Good luck reading or smth.
Ceritanya bagus dan menarik. Alur dan temanya juga sangat bagus. Penokohan pun sangat pas. Over all bagus banget ceritanya. Ditunggu kelanjutan ceritanya kk ?
I haven'tread many novels yet but I like the unique conceptof the novel and I think it has a lot of potential if anyoneis reading this novel I know the first few chapters may seem like they are not that good but after a few chapters,it gets really good so give it a read.
I'll be honest I don't like Novel Idol or anything Idol. I always think that everything is very boring, prejudiced, racist, that kind of thing, in addition to the suffering of the Idols in search of the perfect body, which is a tremendous blow to self-esteem for anyone, since usually these Idols are already have perfect bodies.Anyway, I liked your romance because of the main character, who was thrown away in this world that he also doesn't like, but he needs money and needs to help his family. I liked the way he is hardworking and tries his best despite the attitude of the "Idols" around him.Congratulations on your romance!
Good, so far but the pacing is slow but for a story like this I think that is good. It's easy to read and just well written in general. Curious to see what happens in the future!
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Wow really wow this book is something else from the plot, storyline and character. Guys I really recommend this book it's super amazing where have this book been? THIS IS A MUST READ. author you are talented!
Damn, I vote hard for this. There novels about western-fashioned magic systems are so few... And I like them most)Also would be great if MC was similar to Leylin in logic(not some philanthropic hypocrite) and his search for the truth of the world)))