any spoiler involving the childhood love of the mc , as i am really curious
I like this story! But a liitle minus in grammar. But if i put it a side i like this story! And i very like the story development!Finally i really like the ML! So domineering! ???? I hope this story not been drop for sure! ???
This novel is amazing you must try it.This novel is amazing you must try it.This novel is amazing you must try it.This novel is amazing you must try it.This novel is amazing you must try it.This novel is amazing you must try it.
Is he going to be a hero to the end or will we see some hardships to harden him later on?Please answer me.
Love it so farYou do need to add a goal for him to achieve so the story can have a nice progression and for readers to be guessing always good fun. ?
I needed a 10th review, so here I am again writing something about a story that I love dearly and hope that each of you read many a times over and enjoy it slowly like the tastiest food you could ever eat. Please let me know here if you have any questions, remember to vote for your favorite authors stories, and leave me a power stone or two or three so I know you exist. Appreciate it and woohoo! The spell is complete!
So lengthy to read and absolutely fcuking boring. The story premise is good, but the added extra details are very lengthy that make you feel like reading same business news from different magazines one after another without gap.
Please more chapter??????????more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!more chapter please!!!
Let me preface this by saying that this in my opinion above the level of junkfood, but not at sushi level and definitely not at wagyu beef level (for now). I really don't think that this is special in some way as it is the tried and true time travel and video game story. I find the MC to be pretty enjoyable as he hasn't been a complete ass hole from the start even though he seeks revenge in a certain sense. He thinks with long term benefits and he isn't ridiculously OP from the start. Characters are very lackluster though. The side character roommates rarely show up and they are typical to say the least. NPC characters which I would hope have more personality seem more like NPCs which isn't bad, but it kinda sucks. I think my biggest problem is this question: Why not make the genre a wuxia or xianxia mix instead of making it a video game one? To me, it seems as if replacing the scenes with IRL with more in game stuff would be just fine as IRL doesn't seem to matter much anyways.
In my subjective opinion, I quite like this novel but somehow the translation is getting worse since the beginning or maybe the editing..anyway, reading it now is not enjoyable with the writing lines or paragraph all over the place.
This novel is terrible. The mc just contradicts himself and says he is seeking for power but he can’t even see it right in front of his eyes. Book had potential but sadly not.
I absolutely love this book 11/10! There's just something about the crafting and world building that makes it feel so magical and real. I can't put this book down I binged it in a day (7ish chapters as of this review) and I can't wait to read more. I've never read a book from the perspective of an old man and I have to say I prefer it to the rest now. If you're looking for a fun and magical read I'd highly recommend this!