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Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
This is an outstanding story I am really excited to see where it leads! :)
I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character Development . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it .
I recommend Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking Go look at other reviews
Its a 1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead Of this
The concept is good. I like detective stories so....much. just keep updating more chapters so that I can read more of this story. Keep fighting Felix!!!!!!
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This LN may turn out to be a hidden gem. It all depends on how the story unfolds further. The MC is too ruthless and a deep mystery lurks around the mc. We'll know everything soon enough.
The character design is good. But I'm actually more excited about the story.
Bro did you ever imagine if hulk thinks that by fighting in hilk form is too easy and so he starts fighting as Bruce banner.
Your novel seems same bro you make mc op but when fighting he didn't even come in middle of the chart. He don't use his powers and don't use his weapons fights with hands and you say that there is no need an Excalibur for gobli. But you still use hands when fighting high level monsters and say that they can one hit ko mc.
Are you really kidding me bbro...,............
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First 100 chapters chapters are very good. After 100 chapters, Everything becomes very clichéd & cringy. It's like, first 100 chapters & remaining chapters are written by two different authors.
Really tried to put up with it despite the issues, but I just can't. First the Cultivation is ridiculous, the MC just spends one chapter every so often and bam he skipped many levels in a short time to deal with the current issue, even the Dao comprehension part is just skipped as the MC just gets a rare resource that allowed him to comprehend the Dao automatically every now and then. I kid you not there was a fight against an arrogant young master in the starting small province of a sub-continent that took 5 chapters despite the fact that the MC can one shot the dude and the tournament took like another 10. That is a smaller part of the next issue, the author loves going into detail about the most meaningless things but has no issue glossing over things that are important, do you want to read about the MC losing his V-card to his wife on the day they got married, in which they started dating the night before? Do you want to hear the background story of the Aunt who is arguably one of the most important characters and a harem candidate? Well to bad as you will get a fade to black. Even with important things that did get explained we had some fade to black stuff happen multiple times, like we got no less than 2 times where the circumstances of the MCs birth got interrupted by nothing before we are finally told, which feels like the author's failed attempt to create interest.The Cultivation system is crude and not well explained or thought out, like there is a certain power that allows one to fight above their power level, but everyone can use it so everyone can theoretically fight above their level. I guess the most popular comparison I can think of is DBZ where power levels are impossible to properly measure but you can still tell if you're weaker or not. So don't expect cultivation realms to mean jack****.The Earth bits should be thrown out as it is a complete dumpster fire. This story would have been at least a 3.5/5 if the earth stuff never existed tbh as it is somehow the absolute worst thing about this series.
Name: Fellow Doaist Chen, Can You Get Further Away From Me 陈道友，请你离我远一点行不行Author: Daddy Almighty 爸爸无敌 Lv.5Chapters: 211chapters(480k words)Status: Ongoing