in my opinion this novel Synopsis, is the most interesting from all this group of the Pilot Read, there is so much to enjoy and have fun in this story, very hope that it will be pick up for the Trial Read, and we can really enjoy a good 40 chapters, and who knows! it may be pick there for a series too, from all of them this is the very best :)
There are too many plot savings, the lack of logic is awful, the author confused transmigration with going back in time. This is just a waste of time. If you want to read something similar but better, the ancient world is a way better option. or the legendary mechanic in case you haven't read it yet.
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. Follow me for exp ;)
16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
So far so good. Nothing really to complain about. All very positive results. Not to fond on the MC being betrayed by his loved ones but that's just me personally. The idea is good and it's a good start to the novel. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will become. Hopefully not too much betrayal. Would be cool to see some guilty individuals who regret what they did instead of being the heartless twits that are so commonly seen on this platform. Other than that, I'd say it's a good start.
I really like this novel, if there are more chapters please update
This is a great book. Underrated because it may be a bit slower than many people's preference, with less violence, gore and ***, but the character development is unmatched.
Repetitivo de mais, ele passou 15 capítulos na mesma coisa, uma coisa horrível de ser ler, não sei como aguentei tanto tempo, é a pior história que já li.
The story is good, it's worth your time getting invested in it. Tongue-in-cheek first-person protagonist, dystopian urban setting and sci-fi elements.
Proof: Trust me bro
Amazing work from the writer here. It's been a long time since I read a story like this and I love it. I love the creativity and everything about the book. Keep it up.
overall a very good story just hope that the author didn't drop it cuz it stopped at 69 but we will see
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