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giving it a 1 star cuz the author probably dropped the novel just so that he can start another novel.. I didn't even bother checking if the novel has been dropped before reading the raws.. who would've thought that a dropped novel would get selected for trial read..
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I've binge read it and all in all it's fun to read. The overall it just fits my personal tastes when it comes to stories. Early chapters tends to be confusing cause it's still early but over time the writing improved. It's very fun to read.
I've read the other works and I can see a lot of improvements. Keep up the good work.
bland story, it is too rushed, and another boot licking story where women will do anything just to get a small amount of money and mc is bland
I made it to chapter 50 and decided to drop it. it's an interesting concept, and the mc is working towards the goal he set for himself. BUT the writing started to designate. Run on sentences, no punctuations, and like all stories on here; character name changes.
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this novel have a huge potential for top ranking ???? even the pace is slow but it is necessary for some details. the story also look much more deep than what we see/read. hope the quality maintain at the top ???
Good story of a magic swordsman reincarnated into a futuristic world. I really like the hardworking MC and how the setup for the magic swordsman blending into a mecha is coming along. Hoping for more world building and to learn more about mechanics, magic and our illusive system.
Honestly, I liked it at first but when lily was taken away with the white hair lady, I kind of didn't like her, why didn't I like her? well I don't like it when FMC is taken away and not with max even if it's to make him strong, why not just be with max and grow strong together? sorry this is just my personal review(Google)
I have enjoyed a lot and I can't get enough of it. This novel woahhh ❤️❤️❤️ not only I love it, am more addicted to it. My Kiyotaka let's meet soon ???.
This novel is absolutely amazing, the writing quality is splendid and the story is awesome. This book is about a weeb that starts out as weak as he can be but unlike other Reincarnated OP MC’s he doesn’t have any of the normal cheat like powers, the MC for this story has the power of Plot Armor-sama. The other writes it in such a way that the story comes off as fun and ligh hearted and plot armor moments are you obvious and very funny. This book is not ment to be serious as far as I can tell if your looking for a book that’s easy to read and will make you laugh. Then look no further. This is the book for you. Now with that being said author sama if this wasn’t your intention for how u wanted your book to be precieved, I am very sorry for writing this review. The story ad I right this has 7 chapters. I will change this review if the story changes of what I have written.